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Idle Money System

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作者: APHELIOUS

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A young man named Alexander Ashbourne is looking for a job to support his studies. He applies to work as a waiter at a restaurant. The next day on his 18th birthday, a system appears that generates money simply by idling. This system also allows him to trade with beings from other worlds or even visit their realms. Watch as Alexander rises to fame across all the realms.

[DeathlessOne: I just spotted this mortal, 'AlexanderTheGrate,' trying to trade his drink called Mountain Dew. I'm thinking of offering my Flame Sword for it.]

[ShadowEternal: Wait, what’s a Mountain Dew?]

[TimelessWanderer: Are you seriously considering trading your Emperor-grade sword for a mere drink?]

[DeathlessOne: It’s not just any drink. The taste is out of this world, It's even better than the heavenly wine.]

[ShadowEternal: {...}]
[TimelessWanderer: {...}]
[Everyone in the chat: {...}]

[RichNigga: You know what, I’m in. I’ll trade my Gold Deluxe Armor just to see if this Mountain Dew is worth all the hype.]

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    APHELIOUS

    Author here Rating this book 5 stars cause its my books, If any question regarding this Novel. Just comment here.

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    Alanray64

    Disappointing overall. Reads like a quick wish fulfilment novel with not much thought added. To many grammar and mistakes noted and apparently even when pointed out they are not corrected. The early chapter lock appears to be a quick cash grab so that put me off almost immediately. Still I did try to give this a fair go but I couldn’t get into it, I felt it just seemed to fanciful to even resonate in some manner with me. Overall I can see this struggling to make any fanciful impacts.

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    tiko_tiko

    Great Novel, As an Author my self who writes a novel where MC gets free money I can say the novel is very good.

    1mth
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    UncontractedAuthor

    It’s a well written story with well crafted characters and a good plot. I love it. Keep it up

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    Mela7
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    Very good but I'm struggling with your tenses but over all it's good

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    LoliCosmos

    bro only 16 free chaps? why? .

    1mth
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    Buvi_Sailor

    As much as I like the plot, there are some things to taken care of. Grammar, phrases and punctuations. Other than that pretty good plot and characters.

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    Casa_Nova_8235

    This is my first time rating a story on this app. I just want to say that I like this story. Aside from the very minor errors in typing/grammar, nothing to criticize, at least from my perspective. I don't like Harem though, and I'm not sure if this is a harem one, but I'm seeing some signs. I would still continue reading this for the plot huehue

    1mth
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    Nehemiah_Ampong

    Keep up the good work author. Your story is great and I believe it has much potential

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