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(hey this story isn't mine just translating)
This is a time when gods did exist, yes this is ...... Greece!
God wilfully squandered his rights, as long as good-looking men and women regardless.
This is Greece!
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It's got a decent story premise, but the amount of things wrong with this work could fill an essay. there are multiple breaks in the work that make it very obvious that this was written out using talk to text, chat GPT, and other tools of the like, which isn't inherently bad but it wasn't edited in the slightest and needs a full revision to be even close to grammatically correct in some portions. The character design is the most flagrant of issues in this fanfiction, with all of the characters not acting even remotely how they would in the Type/Moon universe. to be honest this feels more like a Greece mythology fanfiction than a Fate one; other than some basic characters added in, nothing lines up with the Type/Moon universe.
For the review, it's decent so far but spelling/grammar could be better. There are also some paragraphs which are reapeated. For the plot, it follows other cn typemoon greece ff's, girl hephaestus, mc a student of chiron so and so forth. Also what's the raw name of the fic???
there's some transition problem on chapter 20-ish but fixed on chapter 27. it's a really good nasuverse fic, I definitely recommend if your looking for something entertaining
Good! Must try at least!! i hope he become a Heroic Spirit, since i love a Fate Fan fic that make the MC a Heroic Spirit