概要
There is a phrase, sleep with one eye open.
I understood its meaning the hard way.
Join me on my journey in the Marvel universe. There will be adventure, action, comedy, sex and a lot of stuff. At least that's what the internet suggested me to add (not the sex part, that's my teenage mind). Though this is my first book, I will try my best to make it an unforgettable one.
I do not own Marvel, but I do own the characters I made. Hope you will find this interesting.
NOTE: The pics I have uploaded are not mine but they were so amazing that I couldn't resist putting them here.
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Great Idea but HORRIBLE Execution…. The grammar is meh…. The mc is not one that I would route for. Tracey is *facepalm & sigh…. Your thoughts are everywhere… Nothing is flowing well. Please put some more thought in how to make the story. I am also taking a screenshot of my review for this story because I only see one other review that is below a 4… The rest is 4-5 stars… None of the reviews make sense and others don’t even put down words just “…” Good Day
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Amazing start, makes me want to see what's next. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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bad fanfiction, nonsensical powers, dumb mc, don't know why has such a high score. qqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq
Good evening people, AdonisZ here. I just started another fanfic, this one will be on the Narutoverse. Hope you will give it the same love you have given this one. (Also I gave myself a five star review, hope you didn't notice, teehee).
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...................................................... Amazing story so far i really liked this... ......................................................
I likes, I likes ........ Update FAAAAAAST..........[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i really liked the book ..... i hope it continues [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pacing of the story and transition of personality of mc is a bit rough in previous chapters. Massive improvements so 5 stars.
It's good bro, but the paras are wayyyyyyy too long and you never use capitals or exclamation marks so it lacks immersion. 4 stars for the writing quality, 5 for everything else. Love the humour, I'm Indian too and studying for 12th boards so I totally relate :)
Amazing , way to go , loved the clarity of thought and it is indeed nicely articulated ...could relate to most of the parts and took me back to my younger days had those nostalgic thoughts ...
Hmmm.....I just felt the call of Harem. ........................................................................................................................................