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I Sell Fate Through A System

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作者: Hyowha

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In a remote alleyway stands a store. No one truly understands what it is selling, but people traverse it anyway.

"I hear the place fulfills your wildest dreams," says a female who wants to remain unnamed. "People who enter never wish to leave."

"The store-owner is a jerk—the prices are expensive, the staff is rude and you serve yourself," another male explains, "what, I'm still going though."

"I'm just here to look at the cute girls," says—well, his opinion doesn't matter, anyway.

"Listen, whatever you do, don't mess with the immortal siblings there. Who that is? The store-owner and his sister, of course! Why we call them that?" The person shudders. "Because we couldn't think of a fiercer name yet."

Within the store, an inconspicuous youth sits at the counter. In his head rings a cold voice, "Quest completed, ask Host to prepare for the next one."

"Eh, but I don't wanna."

"Quest issued, asking Host to check."

"Meh, I don't like it, give me something else."

"Non-compliance will lead to death."

"Sure, I'd love to see you try."

"...Please just do the quest."

Welcome to the Store of Fates! Dear customer, would you like to change your destiny too?

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    Photogenic_Male

    This book has great potential with an interesting storyline as I will imagine that we will see the history of the main character played out through the sales of his wares. The current update frequency is insane with one chapter a day while still maintaining a good writing quality. That's all that can be said right now with how little has been written however I look forward to the next few chapters. The redundancy of a system being non-physical seems a bit much but that's just me being a bit nitpicky. Side note - First time rating a novel.

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    AbandonedButterfly

    So here I am surfing through Web Novel looking for Potential novels to read and I came across this and I'm like "Hmm I'll give it a try" and a hour later I end up reading all of it. My Opinion of this novel is that the MC is pretty Unique, A Immortal being older than the cosmos and that can't be killed. The system too is unique, it's actually a race? Interesting. I also love how the author puts in personalities and emotions in the characters involved. I also thought the way the MC would sell fate would be the same as others but the Author said "Nope this is a unique story" and I was so amazed reading it, intrigued even. I LOVE how every character that tries the stores products end up walking different roads and not the same plot. I have so many things I love about this novel I can only rephrase it as I LOVE THIS NOVEL. ❤️😭 Please keep updating and don't give it up, it's simply so good I have to know the end!

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    recon100035

    Please don't drop it is a wonderful story. The main character is not the usual psychopath, and that is very refreshing. the system actualy is not just some being that exists for no reason and is actualy a main character.

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    IX1st
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    This novel is great so far. The characters have their own personality going for them, and the world seems to have a vast history. Perhaps you can further explore the relationships that the MC has with the worlds. I can see that this has a lot of potential, so I hope it doesn't get dropped anytime soon.

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    OTC_GAMER

    It is a good one the only problem is updating stability for a new novel updating 3-7 chapter a day is the norm but we'll you rule just increase the updating stability

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    TheRealThyhy

    This book is amazing. Thats all. Read it now You wont regret it Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool

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    Thee_AngryBird

    sell my fate 🤫🤫🤫😂😂😂👀😂🥳🥳🥳😂👀🔥🔥👀😂🐒🐥🥳🥳🖕🐥🐒💪👀🔥💔🐒👌🥺🥺😝❤️🥺🤫💪🙄🌠☄️💧🍆🍆🍆☄️🌠🤔🙄😃🐥💪🙄🐥🥳😂💩💩😭🖕🖕🖕🥳🐥😭💀💀💩😂👀🔥🔥🔥👌👌🔥👀😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

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    phrogberry

    I honestly like the story. Everything is good about it. Nothing revolutionary or game-changing but it is interesting. MC and System interactions are smth new and cool. The story is pretty much crack and has nice humour. There are not enough chapters tho. If you want a light read where you won't have to overwork your brain cells definitely recommended. I personally LOVE storeowner stories, most of them are stupid, this one tho is quite cute and fun. Keep up the good work author! <3

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    MichaelMvv

    I am loving this novel so far. The writing quality is excellent and the story flows nicely. Although I have seen the “VR game in another world” type of novel before, this is by far the most unique and interesting. I am also enjoying how the MC is so OP but remains low key. I Can’t wait to se where this novel goes!

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    DaoisthpkF2D

    The story is really good. The MC is an old monster that can't die who has already tried pretty much everything there is to do in life. In an attempt to change his undying fate, he opens a store that gives other people the chance to explore his own memories and rewrite history. Reads kinda like a mystery where the customers try to puzzle out their way through the memory instead of brute forcing it like the MC. Who knows, maybe both parties may learn something.

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    Viooooooo

    plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss,upppppppppppppppppppppppdateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

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    Wiles_Fidel

    Please update new chapters. I beg you! I don't mind even if I pay tickets.... I won't reduce a star in my review due to updating stability. So please.... (A member of the still waiting group.)

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    SujayPatra

    So far its great. I like this unique MC i haven't read in any novel. And also the System is very interesting. I'm really looking forward for more Chapters. And a Stability in Updates.

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    ThisNovelSucksBro

    No tags on the novel -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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    Crimson_Assassin

    Common grammatical errors, that author refuses to fix, stating no one is paying him to fix them so he wont. I cant force him to fix it, but i can give a bad review

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    Daoist_Ra1n_

    Hoping for more updates soon. Though I am impatient... UPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATESUPDATES

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    Aviral
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    This is the first novel i have ever read in which MC is stronger than the system... ____________________________________________________________________________

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    TrevorTNT

    Someone face slapping their own system with it not being a cold machine or being able to force their hand? I'll read this purely to see that! (Putting all 4s till I read and remember to change or decide too)

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    Mr_Lonely_001

    absolutely love the concept been waiting for something like this, purple flying elephant purple flying elephant purple flying elephant purple flying elephant

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    INVRLied

    I thought it will be like "Trafford's Trading Club" where the visitors/customers would have a significant turning point in their lives after entering the store BUT it became like "Internet cafe in another world" where they can improve their cultivation. Such a disappointment. I really thought that the MC will sell items that has cheats to create cliche MC or selling gift/talents etc or even souls/memories of higher cultivators WHICH can actually change fates... Sigh, what a disappointment.

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