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" Where am i , is this real , is this really reality ?"
Isabel's parent's recently died in a car accident .Isabel is a 17 year old who goes to school in St Louis' high school and a boarder. When she hears about her parents death her world start falling apart .Finally in the country side in Cornelia. She meets something magical in the attic . What do you think will happen?. who do you think she will meet?.
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Thanks everyone for the support Expect that I will try my best to make the story even better . Thank you for your review I really appreciate
I advice not to put the dialogues of the characters inside the paragraphs as it creates a confusion. also after using a comma(,), add a space to make it look more organized. The story is interesting and still have a lot of potential considering it only have 2 chaps. So keep up the good work and keep improving! (๑・ω-)
I like the book a lot! Though I will say the paragraghs in the chapters are a bit long an believe needs to be a little spaced out but overall the story is really nice and I love the plot in the story I am definitely excited to see what's next with the story :D
omg, reading this book made my day, I mean the author did a wonderful job but a few grammatical errors, but when you skip through them you find it fun to read.
The story is quite unique. With only two chapters and I am already interested. Dear author, keep updating. May love to know what happens next.
Updating the next chapter really soon❤❤ Thanks for your support and reviews ,will surely do better in the next chapter. 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝
I really liked the story. It just 2 chapters , but I feel like I want to read it further . The story development is very nice. The writer is doing great job.
This book is fantastic..although its just two chapters and little errors here and there..the author managed to make it captivating and intriguing..🌺❤️..good job author..i support you
Great book loved every minute of it great writing quality amazing story development it is amazing Character design oh don't get me started felt like I was the characters themselves and the world background is just amazing
Oooooohhh!!! Another fantasy romance novel❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I rrad first two chaps. Enjoyed it to the edge.Love this author. Keep going.. We will keep motivating you.Good work.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hi guys, I keep asking for it but I hope you all can give this book a chance ! Also if you have any advice to improve my writing,please tell me I want to really improve my writing
intriguing and interesting novel and really good start but there are some typos but you are new author good luck an keep it up author oe....
Well the opening isnt what I expected by the title, and there are sole punctuation and capitalization errors- but over all im curious to see where this goes
So am a real fast reader and finished this in few minutes and i have to say that this is quite interesting, its viewpoint is from the FLs and i'm hooked. Keep it up author.
The writing is good but there is an element of surprise in general. The novel is good Keep writing, I'll follow a novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Wow its a good story I just love the plot and the setting ,can't wait for the next chapter,there are some errors but the story its beautiful❤❤❤❤
Love the plot and the concept. Keep up the good work ✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Looking forward to more chapters.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌✌✌✌✌
So the story line is intriguing, though I hope she won’t give in to easily. Some parts were a little confusing. Definitely need to improve the grammar and probably space out the paragraphs, but in all it’s not a bad story and I look forward to what’s in store!😊😊😊
Though there are some typos, the author writes English very well, and does a good job on describing not only the setting, but the characters as well. The main character, Isabella, sounds super cute as well. I can't wait for more chapters to see how the story develops.
Oh my!!! This is absolutely fantastic! I can't believe I read more than I honestly planned to. This plotline is amazing and truth be told I love it. it's a five star for me.