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Since I had the Chat Group System everything has changed!
"Gaara you can move aside," said a green bushy browed jumpsuit youth.
"What do I do now that I'm married to Lady Tsunade," asked a perverted nose-bleeding toad sage.
"Having a harem can actually be so boring," said an ero-chief smoking a cigarette.
A story about bringing happiness to the world.
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if the character is not sasuke is ok, because he is master of the edge lord.. if the character is not sasuke is ok, because he is master of the edge lord..
I have three main issues with this novel. First of all, the group chat. It's the main focus for most of the novel, but it isn't very well implemented, and the plot would be much better if it was omitted entirely. On a similar note, the MC's goal is very unappealing. Just a generic, I want myself and everyone I know to be happy. It's fairly unique for this genre, but it makes for a remarkably boring read. Finally, the pairing. Sasuke's relationship with Sakura is boring. Just walking around going on dates, as Sasuke demonstrates his superiority, and Sakura cries about her insecurities. It's not great.
Could have been much better ☹️🙁😕☹️😕☹️😟☹️🥺☹️😳☹️😟☹️😟☹️😕☹️☹️😕☹️😟☹️🥺☹️😕☹️🙁☹️☹️😟☹️😕☹️🙁☹️😕☹️😟☹️☹️🥺☹️😟☹️🙁☹️😕☹️😟☹️😟☹️😕☹️🙁☹️☹️😕😟☹️😟☹️😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞
I absolutely love this novel from the harem aspect (although I’d like it toned down a few notches and not get every girl that is beautiful) the rights although fast are nice, and the chat and multi world system with quests and the ability to give powers to it so others can buy which make its awesome
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Not my cup of tea Mc is too nice.... Friendship power type Mc....mjjuu66ujjhh6666666666666u777788888878888888989999996655555 333333333333 333444444444444444444454444333
This story is way too cringe 😬 and it definitely not suitable concept for sasuke character because talk about an edgy lord suddenly turning very good, kind and friendly😳. First of all that's Sus as F. second of all it doesn't seems right. Long story short : way too cringe.
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Imma be honest here, i find it sasuke acting like a good gentleman.... It just doesn't fit for me, and honestly, making him become sakura's boyfriend. Just absolute garbage. Now i dont like to hate, and im not saying your story is garbage, im just saying, that this kind of fan fic doesn't fit with me. I mean, amny others may like the idea, but for me, i don't...sorry if this makes you want to quit writing, but i say u shouldn't, like i said, im not one to hate, im just saying this story could have been much better, but, u do u, if u keep going, one day for sure, u will be able to accomplish something.