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As Peter Parker of Earth-199999(MCU) dies shortly after being bitten by a radioactive spider, another soul takes his place. A teenager who committed suicide due to his tragic life gets a second chance in the body of everyone’s favorite neighborhood Spider-Man.
Male Lead: Peter Parker or Spider-Man (Tom Holland)
Female Lead: Michelle Jones or MJ (Zendaya)
Ps- I’ve changed the timeline a little. Peter (15y/o) will get his powers in 2010. A few months before Ironman 1 takes place on his first day of high school, which is when the story starts. Also, Peter is 6 feet tall instead of Tom Holland’s 5’8.
(A/N: I came back to writing recently and was fairly rusty (I didn’t write for almost a year) and lazy. I was doing short chapters and dragging things out far to long in my last story. This is my redemption story, so to speak. I’ve learned from it and hopefully this one will be better. Also, the romance will start earlier since I’m not writing about 11 year old kids going to magical schools anymore. Lol)
No Harem BTW
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I love your stories. Even if you haven't finished them yet. Who cares. So long as you write what you want and have fun doing it who cares. Also ignore the haters. This is a site for us to write and enjoy ourselves. So continue the good work, and of course nice job choosing Spider-man. Always a favorite
Like every other spiderman fanfic on this site It's a good way to waste time though if you have nothing else to do
The writing quality is definitely great. Few mistakes are noticed and easy to understand. There are updates almost every day. The story development follows the movies sometimes to closely… in other-words, it’s just the movie storyline for the MCU. This isn’t bad but it’s not the authors story. The part that is the authors is the Spider-Man in the story. It feels decent at the start but as the story goes on it feels more rushed and starts leaving more holes. The character design sticks closely to original characters at times but others it’s missing that essence. An an example is Tony Stark, the author tries to maintain his playful curiosity and lack of thinking of consequences. It comes off as more like a person who was slow to develop rather than an irresponsible adult. The development around Spider-Man is a little odd but fits a business approach I guess. The world background is good and you see descriptions and events around the realms, BUT it’s not the authors world at this point, it’s the movies world background. Maybe try to incorporate more of the authors own places… they don’t all have to be movie scripted. Overall a decent story but is missing excitement and the wow factor.
A new aleinwarlord fanfic 5stars without even thinking just hope this one is finished but if it didn’t i think we will all have a new high listed spide-man fanfic in our hands
When i see tag no Harem, my face like [img=faceslap] , bro if u read Spiderman comic u Will know spiderman have many lover.............................,
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I recommend that you guys read a novel «Self-insert as Spider-man MCU» on Scribblehub. It's very interesting, and the Mc's personality is awesome. He's like a mini-Tony Stark.
mj in all mcu is pretty useless, plus zendaya is not my type, ignore that female role, it would be a fair read
Alright here is my review of this story. I think you should add more originalty to your character. Your charcter gives gary stu vibes to me like everything is going his way. Now don’t get me wrong we all like our mc succeeding after all self insert is a wish fullfillment fantasy but you have to make your charcter work for it. You could have used peter parker’s intellect to give himself powers through science or magic it could have also served as charcter development and world building for the charcter. Instead of the plot device which was genie. It also lacks originality as I previously mentioned. Author is just copy pasting his mc in canon events. He could have used comics as a reference and created challenges for the mc which would have furthered his character development and could have deepened his bonds with other characters in the story. Now my final complaint from this story would be is that mc is too op for his current scenario. I mean we all like op mc that is not the problem the problem is peter is facing street level villians like lizard or octavius while he himself is a planet destroying entity. He is atleast planet level on power scale while he would probably grow more stronger. There are no stakes involved here I could easily predict that mc would curbstomp the villians easily. This is not meant to discourage the author in any way just pointing out thefacts hope author would improve. cheers.
everything turns out to be too easy for me, this somehow badly affects the storyline of fanfic and if someone wants to justify this by saying that this is just a "fanfic" then I feel sorry for you. and the biggest disappointment is that instead of a fanfiction about spider-man, we got a far-fetched story of a psychopath who kills everyone at every turn and the main thing is that everyone in his environment is happy with it. in the end what? contrived mary sue story that corrupted what spiderman is i give you a 3.8 because despite my displeasure this story is quite good to pass the evening.
If you drop it again I'll come and find you If you drop it again I'll come and find you If you drop it again I'll come and find you If you drop it again I'll come and find you
It was fun until the Hela part (chap 459), but I think maybe I lost the desire to read that. Things took a turn that I didn't like and that's already taking away my interest in this story for some time, not to mention that everything that happens differently in this story is only there so that the mc can get involved in some way, the world only works so that the mc has screen time when in fact it is completely unnecessary at that time. Anyway, maybe it was always like this and I only realized it now. adios
I finally gave this a real thorough reading, and ngl it's been fun. So basically an amalgamation of Xmen and MCU, a more vanilla rehash version since MC made sure that no character he liked in the "movies", dies. That really took a huge chunk in story development. The mystic arts is also a bad addition, everything is just lazy and convenient because of that. MC just pops everywhere, acts surprised that something bad is happening then fix all the problems. P.S. I have no idea why, but what's up with Marvel FF MC's making an AI as a child? That's the stupidest part of this fic for me.
The only thing i dislike about this fic is MCs love intrest is MJ THE most useless female lead remind me of something she excells at anything if mc dont give spider powers like cristmast gifts
I've read up to Chapter 515 and I think my review is quite informative. The writing quality is great, minimal grammatical errors, good use of dialogues and exposition, etc. The story started really great, probably 5 stars, but the later chapters only seems like there's really no conflict. If the MC is gone for days or months, nothing really happens. His family just shrugs and goes on with their day. No dilemma, no drama, no questioning, really nothing at all. The MC also just appears on every setting where most times feels like he doesn't belong there and was only really present to get power ups or showcasing his superiority to everyone else. The powers are good but I think there are too much. MC has creative use of his abilities, however, his opponents feels downplayed a lot of times in order to be defeated, sometimes with little difficulty, even though they are actually really up the food chain. Curbstomp moments are very repetitive. There's a lot of "Oh, you want to fight me? There is no fight. I will only dodge all your attacks with spidey sense and use magic to attack you without you landing even a single hit and be defeated no sweat. Now I go home with new power up I took from you." Updates seems to be consistent. A lot of chapters to read so that's a plus. Also, No Harem, so that's RESPECT to the author. TLDR: Good story, mid execution, all over the place, OP MC. Overall, average but highly readable and enjoyable. Recommends this to anyone.
Hi there, I absolutely love this fanfic and I've been following and stoning since chapter 20, but I can't read it here anymore due to the new policy. Could you please shift this FF to scribblehub, so that a lot of your oldest and devote readers can keep enjoying your work? Thanks.
Don't like the choice of love interest which is what made me hesitate to read it but the story is really well done...though I imagine MJ as someone else
I really liked everything in the story except the love interest MJ. I mean even if u have plans for her it just feels wrong to me but u do u man. I hope u continue this stroy though.
The beginning is a little rocky but if you hold out for a couple chapters, it gets quite good. I hope MJ and Peter have alot of baonding moments in this fic :):):)
so far amazing im a little biase as this is one of my fav authors and i love spieman but i seriously think that everyone should ayt least guve it a try anyway this book is amazing lol