/ Anime & Comics / I'm Majin Buu, but this doesn't seem to be DragonBall (Young Justice)
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Cucked and betrayed, dying like a dog. It's time to show the might of Buu!
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レビューを書くThis has decent potential, but as it is now, there are only two chapters. The main character is definitely going to be OP, but with wishes I haven't seen before. The chapters are a bit short, but a little is better than nothing. (Coughs in self burn) There are a few minor spelling mistakes, but nothing too bad. It seems more like a mistype more than anything. Otherwise, the grammar is decent, there are hardly any misspellings, the story has decent potential, and the main character will basically be a god.
it's written like a summary and the Skip from one scene to the other is a mess. overall not good.[img=disgusted]
Didn’t like the fact that he made the mic not look like buu. Kid buu would have been so cool.