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THIS NOVEL IS FROM MTL. I AM NOW USING THE ORIGINAL NOVEL AS THE FRAMEWORK FOR THIS.
The plot events remain unchanged, but I am revising and enhancing the narrative for better flow and readability. I will also remove any references related to patriotism and geopolitics. This story is very slow paced, so be warned.
Please feel free to point out any spelling, grammar, or plot errors in the comments below. I'll make efforts to rectify them promptly.
It's important to note that I do not own the rights to Harry Potter or the original novel.
Chapter Updates: Expect new chapters approximately 1-3 times a week.
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Thanks for this. This translation is much better than that other translation that was posted on this app previously, and I like how you edited out all that unnecessarily controversial stuff
Hello, It's the editor here. I am here just to reiterate that this isn't my novel. I'm just editing and translating this form its RAW. I'm doing this because I enjoyed the original story but got fed up with how bad the grammar was. I'm doing this for fun so please don't hate on me.
I don't know how and why this devolved into a racism issue, although most Chinese authors are racist, especially towards Japanese, Korean and African American races. I just quit the novel once I notice that type of stuff, you can do that too, so instead of arguing about who is the racist or not just quit the novel.
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The novel is so boring and slow that you can skip five chapters and you won't feel any difference, and for the story it doesn't exist, Just Mac and my friends talk to each other during daily activities.
Extremely slow and full of chapters with no real importance, but despite that, I consider it a good story (Google translator) ———468——— ...............................................
Bro, how do you handle the stress since I am doing the same as you? Man, to translate and research, and edit the points during storytelling and dialogue. Can you give me some advice on this gruesome journey known as MTL Madness? Love your story btw. May The Gods of Writing and The Gods of Editing bless you...
Really liking this story! The slice of life approach is very nice too, several other stories already have the MC not needing hogwarts early on but the pacing of this book seems more realistic.
It a very good novel. One of best translation in English with a good flow. I would like author to increase the frequency of chapter updates
It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like the daily life/slice of life of MC/Albert and his interaction with his friends.. And I think he should be in Ravenclaw (he's smart and full of questions.. A Ravenclaw quality) than in Gryffindor.. He's have a system, he can upgrade his skill with system and do his quest/mission.. But why there's not much appearence of his system?? What I hate about him is, why he take the horcrux (Ravenclaw Diadem) with him to his dorm after the first time he got alert from his system (when he almost be corrupt/influenced by the horcrux).. It dangerous not only for him, but also his friends.. He should stay so far away from horcrux (he still first year and can't have a way to destroy it now).. My interest to read this story is down to drain after he take the horcrux (Ravenclaw Diadem).. It's dissapointing to see he's smart and always cautious, but still so stupidly be corrupted/influenced by the horcrux (and he knows about how horcrux can and will try to influenced him, but still go near it).. And he know he's different (maybe be influenced by horcrux), but still not return it, or tell Dumbledore quickly.. I really love this story at first, but I don't know if I'll read more after this.. It's so frustating really, to see the stupidity of MC/Albert about the horcrux.. I hope you back to make MC/Albert like before.. He's focused to his school/lessons and friends.. And don't involve with horcrux matters.. 🙏🙏🙏
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A pretty impressive amount of thought was put into this work. Normally, I like a bit more action in my stories but this is a refereshing change of pace. For those who tl;dr: Slice of Life in Harry Potter. The MC is the Twin Weasley age so Potter joins when the MC will be at his 3rd Year (which may possibly lead to him talking the place of Cedric Diggory.) Unlike other fanfic out there, the MC is a Gryffindor with lots of Ravenclaw traits, someone like Hermionie/Percy except less know-it-all and less stuck up. It’s been a little more over than a 100 chaps since the writing of this review (107) and boy is it hella slow, like hella slow that probably voldermort over there can resurrect himself 7 times over before the Author reaches writing the MC’s book experience in his 7th year of Hogwarts. And yes, there are info dumps on some, I would say, uncessecary information that plays a very small role in the scale of things. Info dumping was also unfortunately a thing but was removed in the later chapters and placed at the end of each chapter if you want to have a more in-depth dive on how the Author fleshed out the Harry Potter series. Also I would like to say, things that are meant to be important seem to pop up ever to when the plot is important, for example, the MC finally finds a horcrux in the form of the diadem and was enchanted by it and almost wore it until he heard the sound pings of the system going off. Yeah, he had a system, but I felt unimportant when it’s one of the key reasons he could catch up in Hogwarts. It seemed that I talked a lot of smack about this book but I actually think it’s a really good one. You can see the life of a Hogwarts student without an immortal bald man trying to kill a student every year, no phantom book unleashing a giant monster to kill students, no deranged criminal trying to kill a rat and etc. It’s very normal, and I like it that way. The side characters are super fleshed out and feels like actual people, they sometimes have their own feature chapters which I loved the Twins escape through the halls chapters. And just overall increase in quality of work as a kind of Slice of Life genre before the hectic 7 years of the chosen one
good translation and the story itself is interesting the pacing feels very slow and it can get boring to read at times but for the most part it's a good story also hands down the bast translation I have found sentences are structured properly and other then a few spots here and there that are wrong it doesn't feel like a translation
a banal harry potter fanfic with an empty character, the only thing that can be said is the relationship/dynamism between the MC's parents and him. I'm at the chapter 41
Author somebody already translated this novel with another name i just cant remember the name rn. Appreciate your effort but you shouldnt waste your time with this since its already being done.
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It contains almost every reason why I tend to avoid most novels and fanfics written by Chinese authors. I'm sorry translator but it's not my cup of tea. It's clearly written with their people as their main audience rather than us foreigners.
IT'S COOL AND ALL BUT WHY ARE YOU SHOUTING IN YOUR SYNOPSIS?