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A man dies and reincarnated in Dragon Ball world with a gamer like system.
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I always wanted to make a Dragon Ball fanfic so here is one. For the system specific, I am calculating stats in Excel Spreadsheet so mathematic professors can be at ease.
This is also my first time writing pure action/comedy fic. MC might flirt but I wont be adding harem or romance early on
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I don't own anything except OC. English is also not my first language so English professor reading this book, please show me some mercy. In this hot weather, I am already melting from all that heat from Sun-kun.
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Read chapters in advance, here:
https://www.patreon.com/J_Titan
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I'm not giving a 1 because there is only about 5 chapter but the usage of cultivation words and the way that the MC speaks makes this story so much worse.... it's just not good so far and I'm not sure it will be even decent even with 10-20 more chapters.
Really a few chapter but has a great potential, hopefully it become even better in the future. Still the idea is good so give it a try. .
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I dont write a ton of reviews so bear with me. Im a simple man. I see dbz I like I see crude humor I like. The story isnt far in but my thighs are quaking and ready for more.
Very few chapters and need some improvement but a nice read as per initial chapters. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .