章 8: help not a chapter
hello i just update chapter 6
this what i added:
new
[unique skill created: heavens grace, lunars grace]
[new Divinity's detected.....Error ... Error three divinity's are not compatible]
[system correcting.... problems solved..... second and third unique gift is being given ordered by the will of reality.]
[unique gift: heavenly natures will, Moon Physiology ]
should i keep it the same or should i keep what i added.
original:
space between time ch6
{unknown location}
in the middle of a black void there stood what looked like angle and a devil or some kind of demonic figure.
Angel: "so, how do you think this will play out"
devil: "Me and you both know I can guess how thing will happen but I can only hope they go my way. what about you o-mighty angle of fate." he says making a slight smirk.
Angel: As you know I am the angle of fate but even I can only see what could happen not what will. not even the will of reality know how things will go but they can direct in in the general direction. but you should know better then me. As you are the devil that tried to control fate its self.
devil: your right I know fate very well how fate works. know let stop remising on the past. let the war begin.
Angle: then so it shall be. o-devil of the endless of fear. if it is a war you want a war you shall get.
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[unique skill created: heavens grace]
[new Divinity detected.....Error ... Error two divinity's are not compatible]
[system correcting.... problems solved..... second unique gift is being given ordered by the will of reality.]
[unique gift: heavenly natures will ]
[divinity detected: nature and heavens]
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please comment which on you would like.
p.s i will be posting in the comments what i think the character might look like please let me what you think
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