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A guy die while chewing a chewing gums but luckily because of all the good deeds he does he got a second chance to reincarnate to hi favourite world.
Douluo Dalu and TODAG are both not mine and this only a fanfics.
Don't read it if u don't like it, it safe ur time and mine too
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I know this may sound stupid to some people I want to know is this a harem...? ps:I hope this is not a harem
gawd atleast make a research when making your ff, everyone has a spirit soul but not everyone has a spirit power thats why not everyone can cultivate what an idiotic author
dude you are making it overpowered I mean really rank 12 before age 6 before proper soul awakening
I like these book very creative in its certain ways like using different spirit for the amount of spirit ring to have so mc incorporate the idea in tgd to use in douluo very nice, some other book i read that are best and okay use same wish or has a system but these is much better for the potential of its uses
it's a good novel. You could improve it but it's still ok. You could slow down the mc's power is growing too fast for the story timeline or create a story out of the original characters.
Well... The grammar is BAD, you can see it that there are errors within the first few words.... let see how this goes. Personally, i want author to write êṙôṭîc Řl8 chapters and the girls i like the best are Xiao Wu, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, Bai Chenxiang from the speed clan after being powered up and breaking through rank 38 by fixing her spirit, Bibi Dông, Qian Renxue and finally, Liu Erlong.
4 stars. looks quite promising! now all that's left to do is wait, and see the next 50 chapters.
I guess you can say this is somewhat of a wish-fulfillment novel. The MC has literally 0 common sense and just does things without thinking of the consequences.
vome back please i still love your story line please dont care about all negative reviews because we have different ideas so come and make many chapter you still have to do god ark heheh
i love this book and thanks for giving love to bibidong and now our MC have a step daugther 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Great Idea but what should i say? not my ideal author as its bad grammar so i would like to tell you its better to use grammarly app of you are writing it in LapTop or Desktop
Very good ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
I will keep it short. Interesting Concept But Bad Grammar, No Character Development, Hollow Side Characters, Lack Of Common Sense, Almost Everything Is Confusing, Interactions Are At NEET level.