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Michael, formerly a military veteran turned mercenary, was living quite a peaceful and slightly eventful life. That was until an accident happened that caused him great misfortune, rendering him unable to continue being a mercenary.
After that point, his life spiraled into that of an alcoholic, eventually leading to his demise.
Before he died, he saw something odd; it was a blue hologram with the words 'Do you wish to start anew?'
Michael readily accepted and was thrust into a fantasy world with a mysterious system companion that seemed to be hell bent on making him the best healer in the world. However, as he began unraveling mysteries, he found out his identity was not as simple as it seemed.
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So, good effort. Fair warning, I've only read to about chapter 27. My thoughts on this... I hate the time skips and the character is jumping around all these places, it's very irrational. Unfortunately, before any side characters can be fleshed out or even any situation can be fleshed out properly the scene is changed and then the MC is doing something else. The world is never really fleshed out, I know the author says there are 3 huge continents and you HAVE to go to the academy in order to get a certificate to get in a dungeon... We also know that the police will allow an 11 year old 'healer' to go into a hostage situation with no knowledge of his skills other than that he can cast a powerful heal spell.... had me scratching my head at this version of the police who would allow this based on an 11 year old HEALER saying 'Trust me'. Then suddenly the author brings religion into it and they are calling him a 'saint'. Honestly, it reads like the author wasn't sure what they wanted to do and kept deciding to change it around as he went. Also, even though it's called 'Healing System' and his class is a 'Healer' it still seems like the author is taking it down the road of the MC being a warrior/sniper (or similar) with 'healing ability'. (I've only read to about chapter 27 though) I do NOT want to discourage the author. Even though I am dropping it, I wanted to give the author this feedback so that they can improve on these things. There is only so much disbelief you can ask a reader to do before they are pulled out of a story. I recommend slowing the pace down and fleshing out the world and the MC. You can still have him move around, but there should be more descriptions and backstory on why things are the way they are. Unless it's just a video game he's stuck in there should be a reason. (And most game developers try to add a reason in as well).
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It was very entertaining the main character felt well developed and over all just fun N-gagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagaga gagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagag
Just a generic review. It's 3.0 cuz idk the story but something has to be rated so here it is ig. Anyway, this word count thingy is very annoying I gotta say. Hopefully, this padding text will somewhat reach it but apparently this much is still not enough so here I am, typing.
So far its really good and interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more and will do another review once i have caught up to the currently released chapters.
It's a slow burn, Michael takes his time to figure out his skill and get stronger. But that's what I'm here for! I like slowburn stories, it gets satisfying when the MC improves. I don't this this is cliche, certainly this has a lot of potential in world building. I'm giving 4 since this still have a room to improve.
Pretty good novel to read waiting to see Michael get stronger in the other realm
so far, so good. There's lots of jumping around, and it can be a bit confusing, but may be intentional. All in all, it's a good read so far, and I'm looking forward to more.
The author knows how to write, the story has a good continuity, but has many problems creating dialogues beyond a statement and an answer, making the character development shallow, only having conversations with the system while the other characters are mere shadows in the story. The world development is interesting as long as it is possible to see that there is something interesting, the author uses the resource of mystery a lot and that there is something bigger behind it, which is interesting but if we don't have any answers it makes the reading weak, I read 70 chapters and so far there has not been an arc where there was a definitive answer about something leaving the reader lost (through Google Translate)
it started about healing for the first 25 to 30 chapters. Then, it became all about fighting and seamed as if the MC used healing as a secondary.
Currently at chapter 21. Congratulations Healing System for joining the ranks of "Barely Teens MC". Nothing much to say but good novel so far.
It's all a bit disjointed with time skips, dreams, memories and characters that are never explained.
Hello everyone, thank you for checking out my book! I wanted to put in a few warnings before you start: 1. The pace might feel jumpy at the start since I wanted to set everything up for the future chapters. It becomes slower as the chapters go on since I will be making this a high chapter count book. 2. World building/Characters might not feel as fleshed out at the start, that is because I will introduce both of them gradually with the addition of different worlds and a wide array of all kinds of different characters. 3. The story might seem like it is ignoring some details, however, I can assure you, everything has a purpose, if it was introduced, It would be explored further in the future. Those are the main issues that could put someone off, besides that, this story is no-harem, it will have future characters from all sorts of mythologies and religions and lastly, the upload schedule is 2-3 chapters per day. I hope you give my book a try!