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Hello guys, This is my first Harry Potter fanfic. I like Harry Potter but I am not a Potter head so don't expect it to be similar to the main story and you can find many things different from the plot.
This story is from the time when Severus Snape and Lily Evans were taking their classes at Hogwarts.
Synopsis: This is the story about a boy who got reincarnated in Harry Potter after getting some op wishes from God.
Now we have to see how will he change the plotline of the Harry Potter universe after he became invincible.
This story can have some parts similar to other fanfic as I like those parts very much so don't complain about it.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything in Harry Potter.
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It very stiff and hard to read but has a very good plot. This is from someone who also has a hard time writing a smoothly and not stiffly right It out the read out loud to see how it sounds then rewrite so it sout natural.
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the author of this novel is a kid that I am sure no offence kid pretty good for your first write but try to get someone to proofread it first that's the only thing missing and excess misleading points are there too which doesn't make sense so need to fix that too so al the best and keep on writing
the writing quality ia not very good. im not talking about grammar errors but if you read some chapters you can see the conversation to be very awkward and mechanical! Plus i think the characters are unrealistic especially at chapter 12 the way the girls react is like you should wait from someone much older.
man great fanfic and hope u won't drop it midway .............................................................................................
I genuinely thought it would be boring but, I must say, I was surprised. It was interesting story and quite good at that. Good Job. [img=coins]
at first i was very amused to the story due to snape being the lead plus lily but then everything is in crumbles due alot of mix up like naruto characters , ninja
I like It At the begginning and it reasonable of adding ki or chakra to the world building but the new added that somehow a phone was able to be sent at the same time that mc was sent by God Harry pother and the phone to Hogwarts and 3 professor Know how to use it and learn anime from it will make a big pothole but nice read for pass time
Definitely quite intrigued and also interested by this book many of the things that has happened whether it is the new severus snape doing and handling things differently than the old one did not to mention how he acts and interacts with people not just that but what the kids from the future said about their parents or of themselves overall I enjoyed reading all of this book and look forward to when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book quite curious as to what happen to Severus and his son Jack and how they act with one another whether alone or with the others around
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