Harry Potter and the-Wrong-Girl-Who-Lived

its one of the best harry potter fanfiction I've ever read. there are some plot problems like harry and ashlyn's parents and how they behave for example lilly evans is known for her kindness and james potter is known for his righteous personality but they treat ashlyn so bad that you cant understand why though so far there is much to explore about the story and all the why's probably in later chapters(I hope Moons continues his writing) I like the goth vibe of the story and some logic part of it ITS NOT THE MOST PERFECT STORY WRITING YOU COULD FIND BUT THE STORY WORTH A PROPER ENDING AS IT HAS WONDERFULL POTENTIAL

The quality of the story is quite poor as there is no actual character development of the main character and they have no identifiable personality to speak of. She just kind of bland and there is no personal engagement with her throughout. The story also moves way to quickly and only touches on the main canon events and although there are changes its basically the same events in essence. She also somehow is extremely intelligent and has occlumency skills despite this never actually being touched on in the book. The actual concept is ok but the way in which it was executed was not good. Overall it was a good concept and the writing isn't terrible but there is little to no depth about the book and moves way too quickly through plot points.