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He's a reincarnated person, he read the HP books. Why the hell is he practicing magic in a public place?!!! You're saying he's a genius or above normal in intelligence, so why did he do something so utterly stupid? Welp, thanks for the story I guess.
I'm not sure why this is highly rated but this is trash. 1st of all he's a reincarnated person and he knows about the hp world and he also knows that using magic in the outside is forbidden and yet what this trash do? he did exactly that and he practised magic outside his house, so we can already tell the MC'S intelligence is questionable 2nd its mtl quality
At first I didn't want to read because the synopsis but decided to try anyways and realized the synopsis is a bit misleading/confusing. So far this is a great fanfic and I'm suprisingly' liking it alot more then other fanfics.
So if I understand correctly you took someone’s hard work, posted it here and on your pat reon and are getting money for it? If that’s the case then no comment.
Overall, a good novel. I would love to know how he looks. Very interesting till now and looking forward to new chapters. 100% recommend to anyone looking for a good HP fan fic.
please continue the online version sucks this is so much better I'll give you all my power stones everyday to continue please please please please please please
personally I'm a fan of this novel, i did read the mtl(raw) version of this and so far its pretty good. but just as a warning its very long a year in Hogwarts arts goes to around 150-200 chapters.but I personally love this novel. so all the best👍👍
This story although you Say you are only translating is very easy to read and flows really well. After you abandoned i tried to read onLine but found that its in another language thus i cannot and when i followed the other link provided in another persons Review the translation it leds to iS very bad quality. So i just wanted to say that you did a fantastic job so far and i appreciate the effort and time you put into it before some unfortunate person discouraged you.
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This FF stands out amongst the copy/paste harry potter FFs. There are some unique, creative ideas about the wizarding world. There isn't any real plot yet, but the MC is mature and logical, and the story is more a running commentary on the wizarding world. Kinda more like a slice of life. Still, the story suffers a bit, seemingly written without an editor or a second pair of eyes to catch Logic breaks, translation errors and poor sentence structure here and there. Also, a complaint with nearly every single system story.... Don't say your going to save system points, only to waist them later on on things that don't matter.
I've been wanting to read an edited version of this even before the pandemic, but before all I could do is read the mtl version, it hurts my eyes and gave me a headache while doing so, but i still like it, I know most people doesn't but it's my OWN preference so screw it and I'll have my own fun
This is literally already posted on Webnovel with 14 more chapters with basically the same name "The Alchemist of Harry Potter"
Not a very good translation. Plus the MC changes every .1 attosecond. The dude is a super genius and .1 attoseconds later the guy can't remember wandless magic exists and even if he didn't know he should have still tried magic. Btw don't use google translate to translate more complicated languages(like chinese, japanese, indian, etc...) to english cause' it's trash at translating.
https://novelvice.com/novel/the-alchemist-of-harry-potter/chapter-1/ https://novelvice.com/novel/the-alchemist-of-harry-potter/chapter-1/ https://novelvice.com/novel/the-alchemist-of-harry-potter/ Since no one was posting any links and this is the only thing I found, may people have a happy reading and compare the quality before paying