/ Book&Literature / Hadrian Potter x Library Of Heavens Path
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A soul following a fatal accident awakens in the fictional world of Harry Potter, with no recollection of his identity or familiar faces, how will he overcome the trials and tribulations he is to face while wearing the body of a recently deceased Harry Potter.
Characters that are mentioned that are derived from the original book/movie series are intellectual properties of J. K. Rowling. This book is an adaptation of the original Harry Potter world, all chapters will be released to the general public, Patrons receive earlier access to the chapters.
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Mechs... Wizards shouldn't use them. He has the library of heavens path and makes a mech. He could have used it to create charms, runes or enchantments on a dragonhide robe. Or make the skyrim ebonflesh or dragonhide spells. The story is also about the things every other harry potter fan fic writer has done. Harry gets the dursleys arrested, Dumbledore gets put on trial for letting harry be abused and underfed without magical vaccinations. He will get sirius out of prison, etc. It's just someone writing about righting all of the wrongs harry and those close to him went through using the cheat he got. Makes it worse when it's about mechs
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Finally,,,,,look MC better be OP.....just saying make the MC a bit dark....not evil..but not forgiving **** ...someone after his life kill em....also no training others..one man army ****...add some romance and fluff but no sad angsty **** pls,..Also try to build the romance and no preverted idiotic MC..add some bash..its always fun..[just saying...maybe give snape some love and help the guy..yes he is stupid and a cunt but that dudes life is ****],,,,its not harem so nice....just saying make MC a hybrid..werewolf and vampire? maybe a basilisk animagus or a nundu?..or a Blue whale? think of a flying whale...voldy would just run away..hehehe.... anyway goodluck and goodshow..
I love the story don’t drop it please. For once the mc is not stupid keep up the good work 👌😄... ................. ................. ................. ................. .................
HAHAHAHA the # NO - FEMALE COLLECTION got me good :) the term (female collecting) perfectly describe most harem novel those days...................................
This is honest to God one of the few fanfic's that I've been rooting for, so please don't go on hiatus or bail on us like you did before.. That was just killing my psyche.. Otherwise keep up the good work and keep it real. Peace out!!!
Good background story....Plz don't drop this one......,........🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
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Nice to see update. Hope you update more. Nice to see update. Hope you update more. Nice to see update. Hope you update more. Nice to see update. Hope you update more.
I’ll just get this out there. I’m more into OC mc for Harry Potter fan fictions but this one... this fan fiction changed me. After that first chapter, Deep down in my bones, a new me was born. I fell in love. This new Harry is spectacular, great writing and the story is enjoyable. I totally recommend this fan fiction.
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So far good. The overall setting is decent . Dumbly the same greater good thing . Author should make duelling chapters as those have a lot of potential but discarded in some fanfics. Harem breaks the story . Vocab is decent enough. I'm glad I just read 9 chaps and it was updated to 17 chaps . Brilliant. Dont drop.
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Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this?
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for this novel it has a 10/10 in everything, it is attractive and attractive the writing of this author than with the few! There are chapters that I have become absorbed, I hope you do not stop writing I support you. Regards Author
interesting, it can become ridiculously op I hope you can handle that moment and you can evolve the story and keep the story exciting, follow the story supported you from the heart
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The story is pretty good and flows well. Harry is competent and seems to be setting up for some big plans. His actions are unique and the LOHP, while useful, doesn't seem 100% broken, yet. Just a pity the updating stability is poor, don't know whether to drop, or just wait, just in case.
Dude if the book you were waiting for updating was mine then then I am truly sorry, as I noticed the more I wrote that story the more I realized I am a man with lots of ideas but I don't know how to write properly and around the time I had stopped I had attempted suicide due to depression by taking insulin forcing hypoglycemia but was rescued. If you are willing, I am willing to give you my previous ideas and mind maps for help in writing the novel. if you want them, message me on discord chroniclemale#6872