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Abigail Carton is an 18-year-old college student with excellent grades, friends and a sweet boyfriend. She has always organized the things planned and time outed until she met a Tyler Morrison who changed her life plans completely.
Warning!!
The book has many swears and mature contents.
This is my first book to do love and support me. Every suggestion is welcome. Do not judge the book by its grammar. Please ignore the mistakes.
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So the story is good but not much has happened so far, the first few chapters are really short and the English is in the wrong places, but still readable. an editor would make this great, and i honestly didn't mind the short chapters. I can talk much as not much has happened.
This is done as part of a review swap. The update speed seems pretty stable. This story is pretty much a typical university romance with the FL moving to a new school and gets into trouble/drama with the new clique at the school, finding new love interests, etc. There wasn’t much I could comment on as the story is still fairly new and there aren’t enough content for me to provide a more in-depth review of character, plot or world development. However, from what I’ve read so far, there are definitely a lot of room for improvement with respect to writing style and grammar. It was a bit difficult to read as I kept having to mentally change the tenses and awkward phrasing in the story. Despite the author asking to ignore the mistakes and grammar, I have to be honest and say that grammar is a huge part of a good story and can impact reader’s immersion. Therefore, I hope the author will seek improvements in this area. Good luck!
Hi I love the summary of the book seems to be interesting. She got admission in university. Is she going to meet a Tyler Morrison.? Kindly update it as soon as possible.
Helo dEar auThor. . I like d sypnosis. . Hoping for a great storyline. . Please please please update everyday. . Or a masS release perhapS??. .GOoDluck😄😄😄
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