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I think the story has a lot of potential. But it is currently written like you are translating it from another language. A very bad translation at that. But like I said the story has some good ideas and could go far if it was written correctly and wasn't so painful to read.
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I look forward to continuing very little I look forward to continuing very little I look forward to continuing very little I look forward to continuing very little
Was expecting good things but its a bit disappointing. He has no desire to go against the plot. no reason to even to make a story if you're gonna copy and paste the original story with the only difference is your inner dialog. The only year that has merit to follow canon is the first year because Voldy is there. Second year you can speed run it and no on would even know. He's in an abusive house and has no intention in leaving because he's too scared of messing up the plot. Disappointing MC, Disappointing story.