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In the age of interstellar exploration, three hundred years ago, Mage explorers from the yellow river planet took their first step towards outer space.
It was a joyous event for every mage on that planet, yet unfortunately, space is dominated by other races.
The Peak level Mage from the Yellow River Planet was the weakest power in existence among other outer space races. It's a cruel reality for everyone.
From then on, every mage from the Yellow River Planet began to increase their power level by consuming outer space resources.
Then they constantly researched, upgraded the power level system and tried to pave the way for the next generation of space explorers.
Now, our MC Vincent Carey's ambition is to be the next generation of space explorers.
How is he going to increase his strength and compete among other races to get resources?
How is the unknown little yellow river planet going to be known and feared by others?
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This is a great novel, character design and development, only downside to this great Nobel is the grammar, at times it feels broken and ruins the immersion us readers have in the novel. Grammerly is a great tool to fix grammatically incorrect sentences. I believe with better editing this novel will shine in webnovel.
It looks interesting. Expecting new chapters in a regular interval like other novel of your. So for now the characters and the plot looking good and waiting for the new chapters..
I don't know why I found his master piece this late but god am I thankful I found this today. Love the story, the powers and the villain mc
Good Writing Quality and Updating stability BUT the Author doesn't know how to pace, it took like 200 chapters to get to level 2 limiter and then the MC suddenly flew past level 3, 4 and 5. The author doesn't know how to make a stable academy story line and the factions are all hostile to the MC which is kind of ridiculous. Instead of creating a good story of interweaving plots, the author puts a lot of useless filler chapters and even intentionally putting the whole character status again and again in a chapter to increase word count. Overall, the author has potential but you need more reading, just think quite a bit for a good intellectual plot rather than creating trivial fillers. My words might sound harsh but trust me from a veteran reader and writer 😉
Honest reviews are here.. The speed of MC grow is super duper slooooww.. Ch30 until Ch200, you would barely see any progress, and Ch201 until Ch450 MC grow speed is quite average. After that, Ch451 until the latest chapter, MC grow start to slow down again.. MC is always careless, and the author always makes a situation where MC will always be targeted BY EVERYONE.. MC will always be MOCK, DESPITE, HATE, ATTEMPT TO KILL MC.. ALWAYS x100... From the beginning of the story until the latest chapter.. MC has soooo many ENEMY.. The ratio of ally and enemy is like 1:100,000.. To the point that you would think, "Is the author f**king hate MC? Why does the author keep making a story where EVERYONE is becoming his ENEMY?" MC also has "special Sacred Physique" but practically, you wouldn't see any use of this physique until the latest chapter.. MC stat : strength, agility, and so on are no different than others mage.. At ch.200 something, you would start to see MC Super OP but only temporary because later, you won't see it anymore.. You also would be annoying with sooooooo much politic in this novel.. Who likes politics in the novel? The author will always make MC decide to make stupid decisions.. The author also shows MC status on EVERY F**KING CHAPTER.. So, don't read it.. You will just waste your time.. Not recommended..
Story so far is really pleasing , and a great take on a system novel that isn't immediate overbearing. while there are the typical unreasonable distance issues, like telling someone to stand back a literal kilometer, I personally feel this novel has great potential . I will day I genuinely hope mc doesn't steal down a path of evil, as that would kinda make it awkward that the headmaster wants to force him to be evil. also, plz no kill family, I feel thats an unreasonable decision as it feels like a very forced thing every time it happens.
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I really like the idea of having the protagonist using only 1 tipe of magic. There is a need of an explanation of how the system works because I don't think that the protagonist can level up with out training
The plot and story line seems rather interesting and refreshing, since the book is all about a "Mage with a system". Author has done a great job in creating relatable characters and story arcs. There was something so attractive and intriguing about the story that kept me hooked. When it comes to world build-up and detailing, author has outdone his previous works 👍👍👍 Looking forward to read more about Vincent's journey to become a great mage as well as a super Villain 😈
To be completely honest, i went into this book expecting something good, but really isnt. the MC doesn't practise, doesnt really train and acts more like a 2bit villain than anything. Oh, this guy annoyed me? let me ambush and kill him after school. oh, that guy has something rare that could help me, and hasnt done anything to antagonize me aside from ignore my 'obvious' greatness? let me find a way to poison him and take it. Im over 100 chapters in and the MC has spent a total of like 6hrs actually trying to cultivate and the rest plotting to kill/steal his 'enemies' or make money.
The story is quite nice, I love how the author explained many of the terms as this can make things a bit confusing so knowing what you are reading about is helpful. I am looking forward to what will happen in the future and this is a good read.
The novel could have been good with the premise. But we have none of that in the novel. The MC is a wannabe edge lord who think he is intelligent and a genius but is very much not and the writer has no concept of how to write, pacing, world building, story telling and a bunch of thing that doesn’t make any sense. For example, he kills 2 people in his class for no good reason, but no one was ever concerned, no investigation happened and it was so terribly orchestrated that a 10 years old kid could have done better. I won’t even talk about inconsistency with the stats progression or how unnatural the story develop. I think author himself is a wannabe edgelord with repressed emotion with a detached sense of reality. He is VERY good at filler and repeating the same stuff.
Mc's personality is all over the place, antagonists are all brain dead, novel about magic that ignores the magic
700 chapitres aucunes mentions de ce qui est marqué du synopsis. c'est intrigue sur intrigue qui n'ont aucun sens ni intérêt donc c'est juste frustrant quand tu t'attends à quelque chose de bon et ne rien avoir ni meme exploité la richesse de son univers ...
Other than grammar and first 200 chapters being a slog It's a great story. My advice is to just skip whatever stuff Mc is not involved in. Especially in the first 200 chapters. Story really picks up after them.
only read 5 chapters . . . . i wanna read about a magic world , about magic , power , explosion and more ... but novels don't give it me , the story is about anything else except magic , all you will get that this is magic a magic world now deal with it. i don't know maybe I'm too impatient i will write a better one if it gets any good .
you know i don't why the plot feels forced. all of a sudden, the dean wants to mess up mc. considering there are more harm than good. imagine if mc joins the dark organization, upon knowing who is part of who, he will have to take revenge on the dean by the time he is strong. second thing, why of a sudden the deans wants to mess up with mc? hay 3rd, chapter 23 and it appears that there is a voucher to unlock. some novels have locked the novel for voucher around chapter 60 as it is trial read, while yours although it appears that the wording are at the bare minimum, wants it around chapter 23.