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Genshin Impact: I am developing a mobile game in Mondstadt
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Takumi arrived in the continent of Teyvat and activated the most powerful mobile game development system!
In Mondstadt, a mobile game lounge was opened.
The mobile game being played there was none other than "Genshin Impact."
"What?! I actually pulled Jean, the playable character? I'm going all in!"
"Jean is not that impressive. I heard someone pulled Diluc, that's the real deal, slicing through enemies like butter!"
"Ah, ah, ah, I want both Jean and Diluc."
"The recharge system? It's just a month's salary, I'm going to top up!"
"Still pulling for Jean and Diluc? Yesterday, Mr. Takumi, the game's developer, updated the game and introduced a brand-new limited character called 'The Poet of the Vortex.' Seems pretty powerful."
"Oh no, I've been deceived! This is that guy who often sings in the square. I'm losing big time!"
"Wait a minute! In this new storyline, his identity seems unusual!"
"He couldn't be..."
Venti: "???"
Note : "Genshin Impact: I am developing a mobile game in Mondstadt." This novel and its characters are purely fictional.
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I dont know why you implemented a mobile game cafeThe word 'mobile' means easy to carry but you just made it usable in cafe. You could have implemented a pc or a vr but phones? 😂And why would jean blush when in contact with mc. .. Like she is a kind of leaders mingling around boys and soldiers too. .. Yah there is that ice boy too
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Estava até legal até começar com tropos "chineses" genericos, as garotas simplesmente gostam e confiam no Mc de maneira instantânea, clichê de pessoas vindo causar problemas na loja de maneira aleatória não tem nem sentido, a garota quebra o celular sem querer e já começa o clichê de empregada simplesmente clichê genérico perdi meu tempo.
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Overall, a very good read. Just a small note, could the author reduce the in-game quest content? For players who have already played the game, this part of the story is quite boring. I'd prefer to see the reactions/conversations of the characters in "reality" rather than in the "game". :)
Please update moar!! I'm loving this series and I'm looking forward with the chaos that's coming to liyue heheheh....
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Very poor translation, the translator didnt even bother properly translating Genshin terms and it makes for a very bad reading experience, one might've as well hopped on ChatGPT and asked it to translate for a better experience.
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a pretty good story, so far I am surprised by the update speed I just hope that even if the speed is reduced it will never be abandoned, you have one more fan here good luck
it's beautiful, but timeline is confusing.venti should be already be in monstadt and renown for his bard.this is one of the best no must read
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Overall. Unique. This is the first I've seen a story like this. It all depends now on how far you can keep this story going.
The first time I saw this fanfic, I thought this was an iconic Chinese fanfic with lots of updates in one day... but after reading 20 chapters, I really doubted whether this was a Chinese fanfic, because the translation was good in my opinion, not meant to be racist or anything. , but those who have read Chinese fanfic with MTL will definitely be familiar with their grammar... and there is a possibility that this is really the author's original fanfic (I doubt it because there are so many chapters)... the story itself is interesting, in terms of their reactions In the game Genshin Impact, the MC himself presents himself as a mysterious image which is very overpowered in my opinion, so if you expect Shounen, you won't find it in this story.