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After enduring a sorrowful life confined to hospitals, Kurogane Kaito passes from this world at the age of eighteen. However, instead of finding rest, a mysterious goddess from the realm beyond presents him a singular opportunity. He may reinhabit a new land of his choosing, endowed with certain "cheats."
Kaito selects the world of Teyvat, setting of the game Genshin Impact. What he knows not is the goddess' blessing includes sway over time's manipulation.
Reborn in Mondstadt, he must discern his uncommon powers and acclimate to this novel existence. Yet soon he discovers Teyvat's true nature proves far more intricate than initially perceived.
In this new beginning, he decides to live freely under his own volition.
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Hello everyone! My name is OlwinMoriarty and I welcome you to my story.
First of all, I want to say that English is not my native language, so please excuse me if I make any mistakes. I will do my best to communicate clearly.
I hope you can join me on this journey as I develop the plot and characters. I promise to do my best to entertain you.
I would be very grateful to read your comments and suggestions.
I hope you enjoy the reading very much.
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This work is a fiction created for entertainment purposes. It has no purpose other than to entertain. The characters, settings, and other recognizable parts of Genshin Impact are owned by them.
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Story is off to a great start and I’m always a sucker for genshin stories. Story is a typical mc that get isekaied, this time being genshin. The mc is alright so far. I like that he started off at a decent level of strength rather than a weak level 1, and i would like the mc to be decently strong but not too op to the point where there is no consequences. If he got a cheat of weapon mastery then I would recommend him to either focus on a specific one or incorporate like all of them cause stories usually heavily lose focus and just forget the side powers. Same thing if mc get multiple visions or not to focus on either one or all. The grammar is good, story progressing at an ok rate, nothing much is happening. Keep up the update! Story so far is a 7/10 but can go up or down later on.
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Love it so far. Though the story pacing is slow, I don't mind it too much. Though I kinda forgot, what was the mc's goal? Because while there are authors who make good novel about mc who have no goal, the book tend to be better if the mc have a goal to strive for. Anyway keep it up
So this is honestly a pretty well written story. It just isn't my type of story, so I've dropped it but it is pretty good. The beginning, the first three - four chapters are the worst since it is just ROB and being granted powers to go to a fictional world, yadda yadda. But after that slog it is pretty decent. I'm not really sure why, but I just couldn't get attached to it at all after the intro irritated me but it does seem quite well written and the characters aren't wildly OOC, so worth a look.
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author: english is not my native language so please excuse me of any grammar mistakes i might make. Me: dude your english is betted than the over-all majority of americans and even my friend who is one cant compare to you.
Maybe to early for a review but I like it so far. Call me bias but this Author make a good start to his/her fanfic. I don't see any grammar issues at all (for me at least) and I enjoy it. Hoping that this fanfic will get much love from everyone because I can see the potential of it. Also hope that Author will make it to the end.P/s: There so much girls in there that I want them all!