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Gangster System: I Will Become The Greatest Gangster!
4.73 (25 レビュー結果)
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When push comes to shove, would you be willing to put your life on the line for what you want?
With life continuously steering him toward a life of crime, upon awakening the Gangster System, his purpose became crystal clear.
Follow as Xavier overcomes trials and tribulations on his journey to becoming the Greatest Gangster!
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P.S. This is all fiction and crime is not a joke :)
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For the love of God please don't add any romance or harem. That would ruin the story.....................Btw great work, keep going, new take on fiction and I like it.
Great novel with great potential!!! I am hooked already. Be sure to check it out. It has good development, an interesting and fresh plot, and I'm looking forward to seeing how far the novel can go.
Very good book. I was looking for a book with an MC who created a gang and I found this absolute gem of a book. The MC's system is not super OP but it does give quite a big edge compared to other people. I personally don't like it when the MC's cheats are too OP because then there wouldn't be much of a story to write. Characters are all properly fleshed out and their personalities are all able to be distinguished easily. The story goes forward quite quickly as well but not so fast that there is no connection formed between us, the readers, and the characters in the book. Writing quality is very good, not many mistakes and the sentences flow smoothly. Any mistakes that are actually there are minimal and can be ignored. So all in all, recommend this book very much
I decided to read this after seeing the word ’Gangster’ in the title, but please do not be mistaken. This Mc is no gangster just a typical edge lord with a righteous personality who always saves the day and the beautiful women who coincidentally is there as well. Writing Q- 4/5 no major grammatical errors Story- 3/5 Very common tropes nothing new Character- 3/5,Mc should be in a wuxia novel instead of a so called gangster one. I like his mom though!! World Building- New York To The Author- There is a manga called Sun Ken Rock. Read It
so far the novel is very interesting, the characters are well written and the spelling is nice, but I have a question. Is this a harem? I don't know why I feel like I've seen this novel elsewhere with the harem tag. Personally I hate the harem with all my being so I would like to know how to read this novel or not.
this is great and I love it, I hope author doesn't run out of ideas and add unnecessary stuff like a harem or romance, or maybe make modifs to to the system(this one might be necessary depending)
dude i am telling you if you continue this novel it will reach the top seriously there are a lot of gangster related novels but small amount of them are this satisfying. of this works out this novel can be turned into a webtoon . plz don't drop it as i am very picky about novels there are a small bunch of them that i have liked so far. so good job.
Finally a Novel about actual crime . I been looking for one of these for as long as I can remember. Great characters and Premise . I only hope the author is of the No-Harem sect ......though I can't say I'd stop reading if he capped it at 2....Hope the realism stays true and I implore you to give it a try
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i really like the novel, altough i'm critial in some comments i still like it very much, the only big problem is that the update is super slow
I've been searching for a novel focusing on building gangs for so long. Thanks for creating this there aren't enough of them.
I am not really good at writing reviews but well I want to write a review for this book. I do enjoy reading the book and I feel that this book is well... good to read? like i said I am not too good at this but I would like the author to know that I like this book and wish that there would be more updates and longer chapters cause they kind feel a tad short.
Alright here we go. The author gives a good impressionable first chapter with the introduction of the fight scene. The action words and battle skills portrayed presents a simple yet smart visual of an action scene. The names used are interesting and unique, I quite like them a lot. the story itself flows naturally without rush or lag which makes it enjoyable. Definitely a read you should pick up.Wishing the author the very best!
Good job author, you improved chap after another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
this novel hooked me from the first chapter itself. I love the relationship between the main character and his mother. keep going author.. 🐥 fighting 💪
This is one of the best Novels I've read on this website and I would love to continue reading if the chapters weren't paywalled. really the only thing that bothers me, is that the fights and enemies are getting more and more unrealistic with anime stuff that wouldn't exist in the real world. I think the story would've been 10x better if the Author stayed with his realistic Martial Arts approach but that's just my personal opinion. but I'm not going to pay money for Novels on qidian. I don't know how the contract looks but maybe change to a website that relies on ad revenue or something.
Very good novel!!! Thanks for work autor-san!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] ...... ........ ..........
Interesting story, very descriptive and great world building, although characters are a little flat(not including the Mc). Grammer needs some work but either way great story so far
Author here with a shameless review :) You can expect regular updates and I appreciate all the support, especially power stones that will help with the WSA Competition. I just wanted to welcome you all to my novel and also give you a place to ask any questions in the replies and I hope you enjoy my novel.