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Waking up as Peter from Baelish House after fighting with Brandon Stark
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Damn I'm little finger
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not my novel I just publish it
the author name is "Twubs "
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I have read this thing on fan fiction so until it gives 50 chapter I will not read this Hope the author update ...
BETA MALE CUCK MC. HE IS A PUSHOVER. LETTING SOMEONE ELSE (A MAN) HAVE ONE OF HIS DRAGONS. HE ALSO DOES NOT EVEN TRY TO GET REVENGE. AND HIS SUPPOSED WIFE HAS RHAEGAR'S CHILD.
it was going so well until author decided to make mc into a Cuck.honestly it was repulsive and I hope he puts an NTR tag on the novel
F**king h*ll. What are you even thinking? My head hurts. First you did not exact even an ounce of revenge for them using you then ousting you like you are nothing, even after that you still help them get past the gates of kings landing but what did you get? nothing but a letter stating you as a traitor. Adding to that, you give one of the dragons of the mc to someone else... And lastly an even more frustrating thing, why? What's the need of having ashara birth a child? More so of rhaegar the stupidest character in the series.
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writing quality is pretty good no noticeable misspellings or grammatical error sentence, construction is also good.story development is garbage introducing unnecessary events now the author is trying to make some sort of plot to make a garbage fit in within the storycharacter design is below average because the the main character doesn't really stand out in any wayupdate is pretty good so far as of chapter 10 and last but not the least the world background is pretty normal the author doesn't really add anything to the story so it's just anaverage got fiction.It would have been good if the plot is not necessary forced to introduce things that are really beneficial to the mc.
This is my First review in webnovel amd this is the worst story ever, Cuck MC, unwanted additions to the story
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It's a pretty good fanfic, it doesn't go the normal route other GOT fics go but tries something new and different, the MC is realistic and makes mistakes but he quickly adapts to it and improves,he's smart and doesn't allow people to control him. The characters are well wrtitten and the dialogue flows well, I especially liked the MC's relationship with Ben(oc) . Overall it's a pretty good fanfic, definitely recommend it.
Don’t get you’re hopes up, this is just a reupload of an abandoned fic with only 50 chapters. Besides that fact it’s a very well written fanfic with many twists and turns that are sure to capture your interest. But again there will only ever be 50 chapters of this unfinished story.
Really good story, but extremely disappointing that it wasn’t finished. Please finish this book🙏🏽🙏🏽
Todo iba tan bien hasta que el Mc decidió casarse con una mujer que tiene un hijo innecesario. Literalmente, una de las tramas más forzadas que he visto. Además, ¿para qué necesitas un maldito hijo Targaryen cuando tienes un jodido dragón? la misma historia recalca la superioridad del reclamo por conquista. En resumen, el protagonista es un cornudo que prefiere a las mujeres de otros y los hijos de otros.
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Cuck MC bro would let someone run a train on his wife then thank them for it and pay them to do it next tuesday while he watches from the corner