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Gacha No Life

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作者: PuckZCat

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~WARNING! USER ALREADY HAS A ACCOUNT THAT'S REGISTERED! WOULD YOU LIKE TO LINK DATA NOW? Y/N~

He just didn't know what to make of this. How was it even possible in the first place? It just didn't make any sense....

He literally just awakened....

Didn't he?

Curiosity got the better of him and he couldn't help but click Y to see what happened....

He wasn't disappointed.

The moment he clicked the button to accept, the screen returned to normal and the errors disappeared and were instead replaced with a loading screen and timer.

~TIME UNTIL DATA TRANSFER COMPLETION: 47 Hrs 59 Mins 59 Secs~

His jaw dropped at this.

YOU CAN'T ACTUALLY BE FUCKING SERIOUS!!!

He waited his entire life for this moment!

And now he has to wait more?!

What kinda bullshit was that?!

And he didn't even know what he was waiting for nor what type of Gacha he has in the first place!

Damn his curiosity!!!

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FiLL88

apart from the fact that for every movement and phrase of mс, I want to call him a moron (literally in every paragraph) and the fact that the hero himself does not represent anything (because he is a moron) without a call ... that is a completely readable work ..

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kirkblackwell21

It started off as a good story, but I feel like you kind of just skewed off from the original story before he went into the high class dungeon became completely crazy for a bit after that, I just feel like the story kind of was all over the place. I feel like if you rewrite it and stick to the story that you were doing before everything got out of hand it be a better story.

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Leonardo_Vega_4048

Good book, wrong section. This book should belong in the exclusive fanfiction area instead of the regular novel area. It’s no wonder that it has low views and stones. It’s a good read and I hope the author can rectify this so more readers can enjoy his book. I also hope you can update the book more regularly.

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