/ Urbain / Fragment: Bullet in the Heart

Fragment: Bullet in the Heart オリジナル

Fragment: Bullet in the Heart

Urbain 69 章 105.0K ビュー
作者: Moonamore

レビュー数が足りません

詳細 目次 Reviews

概要

“If you keep being like that, no one will love you, Kath.”

It was her past boyfriend’s words to Kathrina before he left her for good. He was cheating on her, but she got the blame for everything just because she could not give him the thing he yearned for the most. Yeah, right, sex.

Kathrina Reed had not been able to let someone touch her most private part of herself. She was terrified that someone had tried it. It brought terror into her body and forced her to freeze like a survival instinct.

With her failed past relationship, Kathrina stopped dreaming of falling in love. She was tired of getting disappointed with her partner and herself, and she was tired of visiting a psychiatrist’s office just to get better. It was better to be alone. Fewer expectations result in less hurt.

Kathrina was fine being alone for a long time until she met Arthur Ford. The man set her heart and body ablaze. Then before she knew it, she started thinking about him, longed for him, and fell too deep into him.

- Synopsis change, but no change made in the story.

  1. Powy
    Powy 貢献した 1040
  2. BlueR
    BlueR 貢献した 781
  3. Moonamore
    Moonamore 貢献した 573

ギフト

ギフト 0 贈り物 が届きました
  • Powy Powy Inspiration capsuleにギフトした
  • Powy Powy Ice colaにギフトした
  • Powy Powy Inspiration capsuleにギフトした
  • Powy Powy Inspiration capsuleにギフトした
  • Powy Powy Ice colaにギフトした
  • Clairees Clairees Ice colaにギフトした
  • BlueR BlueR Ice colaにギフトした
  • Powy Powy Inspiration capsuleにギフトした
  • Powy Powy Inspiration capsuleにギフトした

あなたも好きかも

7レビュー

  • テキストの品質
  • アップデートの安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください

レビューを書く
Georg_Spaner

To begin with, this is really impressive for your debut work! The grammar, structure, and tension are all of a very high caliber. I typically don't read mysteries or crime novels, so I can't comment on how the plot develops. Just keep going, and you might convert me to a mystery fan ;)

2yr
1 の返信を表示する
Karensia

Wow I've already loved your novel! I love this kind of romance with thriller and mystery genre, the story development is great with strong character design and world background. It starts with abduction and let's see how Kathrina deals with PTSD after the tragedy. Good job, Author!

2yr
1 の返信を表示する
Powy
LV 15 Badge

The story starts dark. The tension can be felt. Well described. all kinds of emotion come up when reading, anger, fear. This is a good start for a starting writer. The story builds up slowly. not too rushed. In addition to the feeling of the ML and FL, other characters are well involved, such as the mother of the FL. I'm curious how the story will develop.

2yr
1 の返信を表示する
SolaceBreeze

I really enjoyed reading this novel. The story is excellent, truly captivating with its well-structured narrative that holds my attention from start to finish. I eagerly await the next chapter's release 🫶🏻, as the plot unfolds beautifully, keeping readers captivated throughout.

10mth
0 の返信を表示する
Farheen_Mallick

love the novel.its too interesting. please update soon.

img
1yr
1 の返信を表示する
Moonamore

Hello everyone. This is my first attempt to write a book in full English, so if I made several grammatical mistakes feel free to correct me. I would be thrilled if someone would enjoy my book from the start until the end. This book is not perfect. My writing ability is lacking in many ways, but please give my book a chance 🙏 Thank you.

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Clairees

I enjoyed reading this story. The character design is pretty good. I hope you will explain more about the setting place you used in this story. While reading this book, several questions popped into my head. I can not wait to discover the truth as everything comes undone in the future.

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
レビューを書く 読み取りステータス: C0
投稿に失敗します。もう一度やり直してください
  • テキストの品質
  • アップデートの安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

合計スコア 0.0

レビューが正常に投稿されました! レビューをもっと読む

作者 Moonamore