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Forsaken by God

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作者: TheLastSentence

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In 1998 October 30 gates started appearing everywhere, this event will be known in history as the Great Change. The first monsters were weak so people managed to clear the gates with simple equipment. But after two months the monsters became much stronger, dragon, orcs , goblins, giants, werewolves, creatures known only in legends began to appear. When people thought it was the end God blessed them with superpowers to fight the monsters. Grisha Efron, for whom the Blessing was the only way to escape his shitty life, was forsaken by God. Thus cursing at the top of his lungs… a notification appeared in front of him.

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Marcel_4121

The ideas in this novel seem very familiar to me, but nowadays, as a great writer said, "It is very difficult to write something original because all the ideas have already been written by others", but this novel, although it has ideas already known to others also have a touch of originality, this glimmer at the end of the tunnel intrigues me and makes me think: "What will happen next?" "How will the story end?" "What awaits the protagonist?" these simple questions are why I look forward to the next chapters. For a first chapter you wrote it is very good, please continue with the following chapters.

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DaoistG6bi36

The concept seams good so i will leave this review. No noticeable amount of misspellings. You sir have written something that has gotten my attention an interest.I would like you to continue the novel to see what will happen next

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