/ Anime & Comics / Forgotten Souls (JJK)
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A lost soul of a dying world and a devil, what would happen if they come into contact in a more appropriate setting?
A Devil who only want a normal relationship with someone and a Ring Knight who fail to uphold his duty. What will sparkle between them when they go to the multiverse?
Makima (CSM) x Ashen One (DS3)
Obviously I don't know what the fk I'm doing. I yonk the cover on Pinterest.
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bro just being a makima fanfic deserves a 5 stars (I'm not forced into this and I'm mentally stable )
The writing really just breathes life into my characters who seem so emotionally dead and I love how it is being portrayed so far. The plot is a tad confusing as of the first 12 chapters but I can see it developing really well. Traveling to wherever those flames take them, finding ways to slow or completely rid MC of the Hollowing curse, while going through worlds and building bonds to restore one's humanity. Might not even be what the Author is going for but the possible outcomes are exciting. Great story and great writing. Keep up the good work
could use a bit of editing due to a couple of typos but I'd say pretty good story characters fit their manga and anime counter parts and good story arc progression. 8 out of 10
El capitulo de hoy me lo confirmo, que puto asco...............................................................................................................................................................................
very good [img=More pls][img=Good night][img=Moneybags][img=Mad][img=Smitten][img=Out of it][img=More pls][img=Smitten][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Smug][img=disgusted][img=Sigh][img=Mad]
I don't often read multiple mc fanfics. But this one in particular was interesting. The writing style is pretty good and I quite liked the first chapter. I am not a huge fan of makima, however the plot was quite interesting. Overall, I'd give it a four. Definitely something to read if you're into JJK.
The first chapter drew me in as if it was a spider that ensnared me in its webs. Pulling me closer and closer, only to find out that the spider is spectacular at storytelling. The spider also seems to put life into the characters without draining my IQ[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=disgusted][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Interesante, espero que está reseña te ayude a motivarte para que continúes...............................................................................................................
Let's do an author review here: -The story is mainly about Veilhem (Ashen One) and Makima (CSM) and their character development when they were throw at JJK world. -Because I'm writing about character in Dark Souls so the story had a lot of gore and blood, maybe a bit self-harm. -As of now, I'm still trying to get better at understanding these characters's mindset so it would hinder my update stability but I think it's completely fine to trade that to get a better writing quality. -The story is heavily leaned on the religious and their twisted love aspect so it isn't for anyone to read this but nonetheless, I'm quite enjoy weiting this piece of work.