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Fireworks of the Heart

Horror 4 章 20.2K ビュー
作者: RyoAlca

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It was a city of submerged of neon colors, there a college boy who just moved-in, was addicted to this scenery, he would often go out at night and walk around the city just to admire the attractive background of the ever changing colors of the nights.

But little did he know, that in one of his leisure walks , will coerce him to concieve what the world really is.

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TetsuChris

I read the the prologue and the first chapter and damn! It was good! The pure emotions between the words are uncanny and excellent! But as critical reader, I saw the story lacked the "bait" to lure new readers in. Overall the pacing is good and I saw no gramatical errors Pardon my critism

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