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In a world called Gaia. A different timeline has emerged, a foreigner from another world has arrived. With the strength of will and a faulty memory. Will he change the world? Or lead it to ruin far faster with the villain?
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レビューを書くThe story isn't bad, it's good, but it's not my cup of tea. I never finished ff7, but from what I know and saw in this story the author understands the world of ff7. Now for me the dialogues are good, there's dialogue that even seems to come out of a game, as if you NPCs talking which is cool, but the dialogues are only good when the protagonist is not the one talking. The only thing that bothered me and made me drop the story is the protagonist, want a reason? The protagonist looks like Brie Larson playing Captain Marvel, for me he has the charisma of a Potato, yes of a potato 🥔🥔🥔 his personality has no salt, he seems like a perfect being, who knows about everything and everyone likes him, he doesn't even look like a human being. I get the perception that some characters have more real personality than the protagonist. If you're looking for a good ff7 fanfic, with a good built world, and you don't care what I say about the protagonist, then I believe you can really like this story. But if you don't like protagonists who are perfect, and who don't even look like a human being (as far as I've read the protagonists' dialogues with other humans is horrible, but that's my opinion of course) stay away, this won't be your cup of tea .
Its good until a point as the author reveals that the MC is dying then just makes the quickest way to fix it get itself killed and then doesn't even focus on it for like what 30 chapters driving me nuts and the gives a almost half @ssed semi resolution and rushing a major part of the plot in 3 to 5 chapters, i feel robbed and irritated.
Very fun slice of life ff7 fanfic with female Seph and Male MC twin. We'll see where the plot takes us, since if the plan goes the way the MC wants it to, the story will end in like 30 chapters. lol
The story has a lot of forced plot to give rise to antagonists, it seems that the author had no ideas for the final boss so he grabbed a defeated one and lowered the intelligence of the protagonist so they can play cat and mouse and be able to extend the novel further, from my point of view.
Thank you, her story was the reason I played Honkai once more, and it brightened my day when COVID struck. Through the interaction between the author and writer, I was able to overcome my loneliness in isolation. Her story and the protagonist's actions motivated me to finish my thesis. Only now have I realized that the 'Never Give Up' trait that the protagonist has for 'Honkai Corruption', 'Erosion', and 'Oripaty' is picturing the author's way of fighting her illness.
im in chap 43 your writing to much about mc's father and his father character is developing to harem emo protagonist are yu sure that mc's father is not the real mc?
One of the best novels i have read. The Mc is just awesome. The world building and characters are just awesome... well done author. Kindly bring more fight scenes in the novel. I just love the epic world level battles of summons.
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Its a really nice read that had me smiling because of the banter between MC and his twin. Give it a shot and hope for more chapters. My one gripe is that there isn't more to read.
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all I gotta say is that this author is the same author of Honkai impact:invictus so this how u know this going to be good.