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# decisive
Shen Ran transmigrates to a fantasy world and becomes a disciple of the Empyrean Sword Sect. Problem is, everything about him is ordinary— ordinary talent, ordinary temperament, ordinary life… In this cruel world where cultivation talent determines how far one could go, this means that Shen Ran's future can be seen at a glance. Banished to the servant quarters as a servant disciple, his daily grind is to attend to mundane chores which will go on until he dies of old age a hundred years later.
Then he comes across a narrative modification system which makes it possible to rewrite entire lives! An avid reader of online novels in his previous life, Shen Ran relishes the chance to read the narratives of everyone and everything and alter them. The narratives modified by him will become reality!
This is the story of how he transforms his ordinary life by editing his narrative and going on to cultivate the Dao, handle calamities, and rule the ages. And he is limited only by his imagination!
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Author tried to portray the MC as a kind person, but his actions are anything but! He steals the good fortune of anyone around him. Selfish, greedy, and never satisfied with anything! What the novel shows you and what it tells are you are completely different, and makes me suspect that later on it'll devolve into the typical faceslapping fest.
Hope this gets picked! If anyone finds the raw please drop it below. I don’t think i’ve read a novel with the narrative editor cheat that i’ve been satisfied with, but this summary has me hopeful the author doesn’t nerf it too hard. The sword bit at the end is a little red flag, but it probably won’t be the main weapon.
I don't know where to begin, disappointed so much potential but the Author just didn't care much I mean why give the mc so much talent if his not going to used it, almost all increased of strength is because of external help either he use pills or magical powders I won't mind if he use it one or two times but everysingle time why does he even have a heavenly spiritual root and a supreme physique for and let's not forget how dumb the mc is, I'll just stop here caused it's just a wasted potential.
raw link anyone? or atleast the original title. ,.........................................................................,...................
MC is extremely OP. But wants to remain lowkey. Basically, every 4th novel on webnovel. I dont think this type of MC will have any redeeming traits. One shouldn't have to look for and rob fortunes when one already has the best of everything. It makes the novel predictable and bland.
Hmm, there used to be a similar novel about a guy who saw narratives but could only change one word of it. Could anyone tell me original title? I remember it wasn't chosen in the pilot read....
he is idiot. ...,...............................................................he is idiot. ...,...............................................................he is idiot. ...,...............................................................he is idiot. ...,...............................................................he is idiot. ...,...............................................................he is idiot. ...,...............................................................he is idiot. ...,...............................................................
I have already written a review for this whole batch and ranked them by themselves, however this will just be a ranking for all novels in 1 review. This will be copied to all novels on this batch so don't worry. 1) Pet Simulator 2) Goddess Helps Me Simulate Cultivation 3) Maximum Comprehension: Taking Care of Swords In A Sword Pavilion 4) My Genes Can Evolve Limitlessly 5) Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives 6) Aiding My Queen With My System This isn't an opinion this is a fact. Kekekekek
Most useles book I’ve read, the author gave the main character powerful talents like the chaos body but he’ s struggling to defeat a person 2 minor realms above him. It’s stupid
one it's a copy novel so point for something new two this more like the first rough draft people make before starting writing a novel as it has a lot,he ll lot of inconsistencies in every character three the cheat is just super op on the lvl of wish fulfilment novels but still it's ok but the mc is idiot when using it even a 3th Grader would would call him dumb four a few other reasons are already mentioned by different reviews
Well.... This is kind of entertaining. I can scold mc stupidity in most chapter, so it's a win for me. With the cultivation(If it really just that few stage), I can predict that this gonna be short one. Maybe under 600 chapter instead of usual 3,4000 chapter xianxia novel. The world, we shouldn't hope too much. Maybe it's a one continent world, maybe its a continents world where mc can go to/upgrade to another continent. But from what I can see here, it seems like a one continent world with outer realm invader wudongqiankun and the great ruler. Mc,not a good or bad guy. He just an idiot (Its actually author), got a great cheat(Reality warping that limited to 3 chances and only on stuff that related to him. Also, reasonable, which in my brain equal to 'must be xianxia-ish.'), an isekai(Past life as our earth normal guy who love reading xianxia novel. This is important.), have chance to lose it. I wouldn't spoil much about this novel other than its having good concept, cheat, but bad implementation. This novel will make every reader with common sense rage beyond the world for mc stupidity. P. S: Don't mind the star rating, it's completely different from what I want to give but I don't want to be unfair. If it just ask how much I would rate for overall, it would be 1 star.
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Average book with op mc telling himself he’s the good guy but really is the worst of al them. None of the characters are written well they are all very on dimensional. The worst offense is that of the 22 days that have occurred this month of september chapters have been uploaded on 3 of them. The only redeeming quality is that it is legible.
It's not deserving to be picked when so many great novels are not. The MC is cruel, overpowered and bland. There is literally nothing human about him.
It may be dropped, its been some time till it got last updated..............................................................................
I somehow like novels like this. I find it enjoyable reading an Mc with op Cheat...........................................................................
he can edit but he only did it 4 times he still can edit about 5 more times then he made himself with much potential yet he always goes after other's opportunities that make his talent pointless as if it's only an excuse for the auther to make him powerful cultivation system is messed up, every time he talk about strength he must make feel wrong for example at 7th level divine sea realm he can fight an illumination realm powerhouse yet when on 1sr illumination realm he can only fight a 3rd level one so author wasted the entire world background like that he wasted 2 edit opportunities makeing an elixir work on an cultivation less than it supposedly be taken for example blood cloud powder that can increase cultivation speed by 10 times but can only be take by divine sea realm or above huh when you edit it it becomes can be take by any realm Remember editing must be logical there's no logic here since a strong medicine can brust with much energy for low levels one's to absorb now then instead of editing elixir data why not find a source to get resources ?? why not try to create opportunities that's much better than stealing other's in which you could use these people as followers thus building a power for himself ??
Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The first major problem is the limits of the narrative editing. Starting out with some sort of unlimited blank check to edit his own talent and potential, the author goes way overboard and rarely uses the narrative editing cheat. Instead the MC goes and reads peoples narratives to steel their opportunities. So the flaws that I see is that the author should have removed the limits on number but instead made much stricter limits on how much a single edit could accomplish. I really dislike when an author names their story about a gimmick and than quickly drops the gimmick.
Translation and updating stability are a 5 everything else is a 3. Right off the bat let’s start with the MC, the MC isnt stupid or dull by any stretch of the imagination. Fairly smart tbh in how he acts. The only issue is that his character as well as everyone else in this novel needs to be fleshed out just a little more. World background is okay. It’s easy to understand but not amazing in any aspect. All around a decent book to pass the time with and has the chance to be a diamond in the rough provided the author works hard to improve.
Why bother with cultivating? just write: [The boy was Secretly the All-Knowing, All-Seeing God; Creator of all Things] The End.. or even just write your cultivation level to max level..