概要
Su’en is the most senior disciple of the Dao Sect in the Heavenly Domain, despite being of average talent. However, he stumbled upon a Critical Compensation system: Whenever he gave up his opportunities to others, he would obtain Critical Compensations, multiplying his gains and rewards.
[Congratulations on giving up a Foundation Establishment Pill. You have unlocked a hundredfold Critical Compensation. You have gained 100 Foundation Establishment Pills!]
[Congratulations on giving up a Xuan Rank technique. You have unlocked a thousandfold Critical Compensation. You have gained a Heaven Rank technique!]
[Congratulations on giving up the egg of a Nine-tailed Owl. You have unlocked a Critical Compensation. You have gained the egg of the divine beast: the Vermillion Bird!]
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Su’en’s junior Ye Lingyun declared, ”Senior, you have done so much for you. In order to repay you, I must marry you!”
The other disciples of the sect announced, “We, the younger generation of the Dao Sect, will bow to no one but Senior Su!”
The Empress of the Sky Demon Sect demanded, ”You gifted me the Emperor Rhyme Purple Gold Lotus, the only one of its kind in the world. And you claim I am nothing to you?”
Su’en looked at the two divine maidens—one good, one evil, both beholden to him in devotion. He said, “Maybe I am selfish after all.”
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I'm usually never on Webnovel anymore so take my words with a grain of salt. I've read the raws up to chapter 300 and the main thing that you'll recognize is the fact that there are no other generations other than the elder generation and the younger (mc's) generation. This is a big problem in many cultivation novels, especially when you have an event that decides the leader of the entire domain that takes place every 800 years, but only those who are under 30 can participate. This is incredibly illogical and I'm not sure why the author does this. Another thing to note is the absolute rizz that the mc has. Romance in this novel can be simplified into a plain harem, such that the process for love in this cultivation world only equates to 1. love for a man and 2. the man must be handsome and strong. It's not complex type of love, and it's for sure not uncommon, which is why this novel does it terribly when you realize all the rewards that the Mc gives (except for the disciples of the sect) are all women. The author has a personal bias, and although the gift-giving can be used as a plot device to instigate love, I would think that instead, a harem should involve a complex net of emotions that tie all the individuals involved together. This novel does not do that as of yet, and the women that are dao companions of the MC default to "he is so handsome and strong so he will get more women other than me" and completely accept it, without respite or jealousy, which I find unnatural and amusing. Last thing that saves this novel is the cheat, which is no different from any of the same kind, but with any cheat cultivation novels I enjoy it's about the same experience. Really all that matters to me is whether I enjoy the cheat, and I did, so it's alright. Still pretty garbage tho.
providence troupe??.....lets hope its good...raw..............................................................................................................................................................................................
I didn't even read a single chapter yet..But I keep giving this novel my Energy Stones 😂😂
Quite an enjoyable read, this novel is. I enjoy this type of theme, the critical return. It has been used in other novels, however I find each story, maybe similar, it delivers it’s own individuality for the reader to enjoy. So far only 20 trial chapters but I find myself wanting more to read. Hopefully it will be selected and be available for us to enjoy.
it has been 7 months since the last chapter. if you won't release more chs, then take it down already.
if it ain't going to get released get it off the vote list and put something up that an author is going to care about
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This will thing never get updated. It's been number 1 in the queue for so long now and no other chapters past the first 40 have been added.
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this was picked last year but was not released and now taking a break? hey webnovel what's ur conspiracy? hahahaha trash app
It's a fallo novel. so even I wanted to I can't read the raw chapter after 320... That's why I kinda hate fallo novel...😂😂 it's really annoying not even be able to read machine translation. Nothing new here just as usual story without any kind of rush . I read similar story like this one. still kinda enjoy this type . You can try it if you want.
Good book👍. Can someone tell the raw name of the novel please. I really want to continue reading this book.,.................,.....,.................,....
Give away your beautiful bride and gain a world level beauty, Give away your mother and you will gain a father,give away your job and you will get retirement. Give away your pipi and your mother will never again call you son.
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Flora est la fille de Norman, le champion de l'arène de Clémenti-Ville, et la grande sœur de Max. Elle remplace Ondine durant les saisons 6, 7, 8 et 9 et elle est la première héroïne coordinatrice du groupe de Sacha. Elle a une chanson thématique intitulée « I will not be Defeated! » qui montre bien sa personnalité par rapport au dessin animé.
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A part of me wonders if this is a part of a conspiracy by scientists to test the limits of what Webnovel readers can read. If you're looking to be mildly entertained then I'm afraid this novel isn't for you since this isn't even capable of that, this novels greatest moments are lukewarm at best. There's not even a shred of originality to be found here, all we've got really is just a tepid rehash of the other 5 million "Critical Chance Multiplication" novels out there. It's hard to criticise the story or any other element of this novel really because they all feel non existent or blank, it isn't easy to dissect the novel equivalent to a sheet of white paper with some squiggly lines on it but I'ma try anyways. There is literally NO story. There is no world building (it's literally the same generic world you see in every other cultivation novel). There are no characters that aren't copypasted. This feels like reading a whole lot of nothing. If this novel was a spice, it'd be flour. I'd bet good money on me forgetting quite literally everything about this novel after I wake up tomorrow, this novel has been a mind numbingly forgettable experience. 0.5/5