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Money Bring Happiness
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Im not the author of the stories.Im translating and fixing this and expected some change
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This is pretty good ngl. I appreciate all gamer fanfics. Don't really have any problems with this so 5 star. .. . . .......... ... . .... .. .
Unbearable to read, i think this still need to be edited by someone who is really good in english or be translated from raw by a pro translator, its not much different than reading mtl its just slightly better.
great novel keep up the great work.............................................................................................................................................................................................................
****er you call this a story every chapter contains 80% inner monologue and information about fairy tail and 20% action scene oh my god do you think in the whole world you're the only person who have watched fairy tail that you need to explain every fucking thing we are not as dumb as you even just having a little bit of common sense a person can already understand what's happening
The writing is so bad that after reading the entire first chapter, I still have no idea what's supposed to be happening... idk if it's just a terrible translation or if it's actually poorly written...
Im very dissapointed......................😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
the story is good but the mc is stupid[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Обновляй почаще! Хочу эту историю глав на 100 и больше! А то мало как-то только начал читать и уже конец! Обида! Исправьте имя героя в начале от этого я очень путался ... у него их было аж 3! С именем не определиться это странно. НО последний вариант Элайджа вполне неплох. Только исправьте!
Well, I already read this. The story and the plot is so-so. Guy gets the skills of the heroes of League of Legends.⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄-⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄-⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄-⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄
bro the link in the descripton doesnt work give us a link that works pls im not a hater i simply want the link ffffffff fffffffff ffffffffff
Неплохо только история очень медленная👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
New chapter I need a new chapter. Your story is great but the English is confusing I understand it's not your language and you maybe just editting but even so improve. MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
I like the story btw, only the grammar is the problem but it's fine I'm use to reading raws I only hope that author continue this story it's interesting because it talks about league of legends cause I also play it, but where is the romance???
The grammer needs some serious editing even the edited version looks really rough and sometimes hard to understand.. . . .. ....... .. .. .... ... .
Mostly 😅This kind of book is on many raw novel sites like trxs. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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