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[Fairy Tail fan fiction]
Due to an accident from the gods, Zorn entered the world of Fairy Tail and gradually gained all the strength of the pirate general Kizaru, as well as the holy light magic.
The youngest S-class mage, one of the Holy Ten, a domineering pioneer...,
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Needed to be deep cleansed by a team of willing BETAs. When I read the summary it showed a bit of promise and also doubt on what's to come. I mean getting KIZARU's power as Holy Light Magic is sick and all but the only problem came when you start reading it. This needs to be proofread heavily and correct a lot spell names, sentence construction and honorifics. If you don't mind that be my guest.
Bro 💀 what the hell. the story is nice and all but the grammar and spelling is overwhelming 😭. this need a proper editor and proofreader.