/ Urban / Enter the Game: I own a Dungeon?
概要
Ehhh... If I remember correctly, It all started when I downloaded a certain app recommended by my best friend. It was a game about heroes conquering dungeons and beauties. The typical stuff. Since I was bored, then why not? However, never did I expect....
El Reid: "System, why send me here when, other than the synopsis, I know absolutely nothing about the game?"
System: "....."
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Author's Note: I would like to inform you that this is my first time writing, so if you spot any mistakes, please write a comment for me to correct it. The reason I'm making this novel is for the sake of growth and experience.
So put down those reviews, and comments; everything is fine as long as its good advice.
Overall, thank you and have an enjoyable read.
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Upon reading, I certainly think that the story has more to show. Such as leaving questions of what gonna happen will he be evil for good or will he find a way to escape his fate. What would happen if he finds another "chosen"? You did pretty much about leaving question, though be descriptive about the mc. Nonetheless pretty much well done.
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I would like to humble myself, rather, tell you the absolute truth about this novel. It's not bad and if you have nothing else better to do, why not give this a try?
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