概要
Due to a miraculous encounter, a Roc that was bigger than a mountain became a clone for the teenager, Chu Chen. Ever since then, he obtained the key to enter the divine tomb. Within the tomb is an immortal lady sealed inside a jade casket with ice. Inside it were countless immortal treasures, elixirs, magical tools, and so on, free for the taking!
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For the love of god I’ll take this. Y’all mught complain about copy & paste cultivation novels but I quite enjoy them SO IF YOU COULD PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF F#^\^\*]* GOD NOT COMPLETELY DESTROY THIS FOR ME. YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO GET A REGULAR CULTIVATION NOVEL ON HERE NOW????
The side characters are probably the worst part of this novel and the clichés you see everywhere make it worse. I mean you can use clichés but make it good. MC is alright, nothing interesting. The premise of the story is actually very interesting but it is executed in a boring way.
ye this novel WILL be a copy-paste of basically any generic name wuxia/xianxia novel so basically don't read unless you are bored. Also isn't there a novel named nine suns divine or whatever
This novel had a very good start, an eagle clone as a separate body is a very interesting concept. This part is surprisingly well done for such a mediocre novel. But let's start from the beginning. The world is a standard Cultivation world, with a death zone full of treasure only the MCs clone can access. Not much detail about either the world or the Cultivation system. MC is your standard OP genius who was held back by fate, or in this case his soul was to talented for his body. His childhood friend, a beautiful genius, helps him survive until he gains strength. The whole thing has been done before, but there are enough twists to make it interesting. But here the trouble starts, standard enemies popping up everywhere because he is seen as trash and everyone else is so bored they can only pick on him every time he meets someone new. Classic repeat, MC either kills them or shuts them up with his strength. Classic village noop destroying the strong forces backed seniors. Every character is either a villain, a week damsel to be safed, a pin-up senior, a pin-up teacher, a pin-up childhood friend or something else for the MC to ****, kill or turn into a servant. No character besides the MC has a worthwhile backstory, consistent motivation or anything unique. MC has powerful friends(even in higher positions in other sects) , a pretty talented childhood friend, nearly unlimited wealth and every opportunity he needs, but he still goes the standard scumbag rout of trying to get every girl he comes across. In one moment he is a wise, experienced man who can endure hardship, in the next he randomly kills a minor annoyance and in the next he riskes his life to either gain a girl's attention or to gain prestige. He literally risks his life to kill a snake stuck in a mountain to impress a girl he has seen twice. He could have run in the beginning, after saving her or anywhere in between, but no, he has to show that he is dangerous so that anyone in the world can get a shot at him. In between, the auther even forgot that the MC had a clone for like 20 or so days. Beware, starving of small animals. The Harem route and the typical stupid villains destroy this novel.
Warning!!! this novel have more 10.000+ chapter. This what is called Quantity over quality. So, you can imagine what it would become.........😏
A lot of these reviews are bogus, haven't even read it because of 'clichés'. Yes, he has a junior sister. However, after reading the first 60 chapters, it's a sweet romance. All the normal clichés have a twist, and are fleshed out with reason. You might find some arrogant people, but some of them change and realize their mistakes. In all honesty the novel is amazing so far. It isn't the typical trash MC turns genius because of old man. MC was so much of a genius that he couldn't cultivate in the first place without literally blowing up. He had to be nerfed to do anything, and the nerf is amazing and original which instead of a nerf, gives him an edge. Great start to a cultivation novel that I hope gets picked. P.S. Witch is waifu status.
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Not gonna bother reading as I can tell that it's probably very cliche and I will just get mad when the mc starts talking about jade like skin and hair flowing like water.
Well, I'm sure the whining phrases of "this is cut/paste" like other Eastern Fantasy novels. Who cares? As long as it's a good storyline then I'm fine with it. There's a couple of cool elements like a non-human clone and a non-monster pet. And hey, an aphrodisiac scene that somehow didn't end in an eyerolling excuse. A little sweet.
A new system everyday got dropped and they gave us garbage like this. I really don't get it. That novel had supporters and views too and webnovel still dropped it. I give this novel 2,5 rating based on the first few chapters.
The raws contain around 10000 chapters. If my guess is good, webnovel won't pick this one form how huge it is. If i'm wrong, then, they really pick novel that is a trash fire.
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What in the world this is gone from trial read I would they drop it it's a great story plus its only been 19 days at least give it a month it can't be the coins it's gotten a few thousand
I think it is extremely well written so far and can't wait to see what is to come in the future. The writer is extremely good but I did not find anything that stands out overall
I'd actually only give this about 4.5 stars, if I was being honest about my opinion. I love the story so 5 stars is for this. The World Background is also good. Character Design isn't weak. The people rating the other characters as being flat and uninteresting have strange standards, where they must only like those characters that are OP like the MC. I happen to like the depictions of the other Characters. One flaw I'll nit-pick about is that the Synopsis says the Bird Clone is as big as a mountain. This is an unnecessary spoiler and not true for the chapters that were released. The people that rated this book without even reviewing it are missing a nice story and burying it to become a future hidden gem. I hope this gets picked up here. I'll spend some coins to read the better quality translation here. Cmrdmao (shortened so it doesn't get edited. Google it.) has over 2200 chapters, but they don't flow as well in English.
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the book was great and the character development was amazing and the story development was amazing and nice and the writing quality was good and clear
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