Echoes of the Urban Enigma

I must say, this web novel is an absolute gem! From the very first chapter, it had me hooked and eager to devour every word. The author's storytelling prowess is evident in the way they effortlessly weave together a captivating plot, intriguing characters, and a richly detailed world. The pacing is spot on, keeping me engaged and turning the virtual pages with bated breath. Each chapter is a delightful balance of action, suspense, and character development, leaving me yearning for more at the end of every installment.

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San_Ri

Hello readers, Author's here. This is the first novel I have written. Treat this review as a Q&A page. Comment your questions, I will try to answer as long as it does not contain spoilers.

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Zarkia_Blair

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 This is fire.... I loved it from the first chapter

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Yrmynoodlescold

The book contains a great plot. It is very interesting to follow a female lead into a city of mysteries. The stability of updates are also great. However, I feel that the other qualities are somewhat lacking. I feel like the pace of the story is a little too quick. There is too much happening in a single chapter and the character seem to travel through different locations too quickly without us truly feeling like the place is important. Alongside this, the world background is very brief and if there could be more description on the places and why they are important and all the stuff that happens, it would definitely raise the quality of this work. Alongside this, the dialogues of the conversations of the characters feel very forced and not at all natural. I feel as if you have stuck too strongly into the plot that you have limited your characters from flourishing with life (personality, manners and behaviours). If you take a bit of time to improve on these things then I am sure the quality of future chapters and future works of yours will definitely get better.