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After defeating Kaguya, Naruto finds himself in a new dimension with humans that had the inability to use chakra. As the last of his kind, with all nine Bijuus and with both yin and yang seal, Naruto blames himself for the death of his comrades. Wil he find people to call his precious ones in this supernatural world? Or will he fall to despair? Not very good at summary
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As someone who has used a lot of power in this series, I found the first episodes quite nice; however, things suddenly got chaotic later on. Naruto was in Kuoh in the previous episode, but he appears in a completely different place in the next episode, and Naruto has become excessively weak. I will explain the tiers: Ophis and Big Red are at the 5B tier, while Naruto in Baryon Mode is also at the 5B tier. However, this version of Naruto has Rinnegan, Sharingan, and nine Bijuu, yet he loses to a character whose name isn't even known yet. He is way too weak. In short, my rating is 3/5.
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I honestly really enjoyed this fanfic during the earlier chapters, but after a certain point there start to be so many flashbacks and time skips that it becomes incoherent to read. if the flashbacks where consistent it would be different but during a single chapter I think it flashed back to 3 different time periods making it almost impossible to keep up.
I really like the story and the premise and I want to keep reading but the author can not keep a plot line in place. It jumps all over the place with random flashbacks that are not labeled and ending chapters and the next chapter has nothing to do with the previous chapter and nothing tieing them together.
i loved the idea of naruto in dxd, but naruto here is a bored broody and arrogant jerk! i am surprised he is not alcholic because he sure acts like he is
the story starts good with one of a kind interesting plots but it goes down from there. i don't recommend this for naruto fans.
if it has naruto it has 5 stars..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The writing quality and storytelling drop off in the later chapters making the story chaotic and hard to follow. Plus the power scaling for Naruto is all wrong. For context this is Naruto just after the 4 great ninja war + a sharingan and rinnegan. Even if you exclude the eyes, base Naruto should be steamrolling and blitzing his opponents not to even mention sage mode. In regular sage mode a much weaker Naruto was able to fight pain, someone who could destroy all of konaha In one attack. I mean he is quite easily a planet buster and is having trouble with people who can barley destroy a school.
this has been a great read up until chapter 80 too much added in not enough written out to explain what is what and where anything is going at some points it's a compelling read and others make me think it's a crackfic and then it's a drama. frankly, it hurts to read. added to that is the amount of filler you throw in it's awful to follow along, so yeah, this is where I drop out
i actually like the idea of naruto tossed there in dxd and all but you nerfed him too much, way too much that his level seems to drop back when he start training with jiraya. ironic how you did him that bad while giving him all those cheats like the rinnegan and the yin yang seal, all the six paths powered and all biju yet he still find it hard to fight a bunch of nobodies from the hero faction. and worse he almost lost in speed battle, like really bro? it would be much interesting if you didn't nerfed him and made him a softie that sona and rias can bark on him as they want. or if madara was there in his stead . overall i enjoyed the first 20 ch until the fight with that persus guy when he nearly kill naruto and ^surprised^ him with speed lol. best luck for your next work bro keep trying.
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