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Welcome to the Re Write of my first story on webnovel!
The previous one being Dragon Ball Time Patrol: Universal Destruction!
This is a brand new story! but some things will remain the same! this story is about The Time Patrol there isn't just one MC! I hope you enjoy the story and remember to leave a comment on how it could be better!
I will still include all of those extra chapters when the main story is complete!
Ill be adding more Characters so if you have an OC of yours and you want them featured Message me on Discord at Nico Leztier#6474
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Thanks for Reading the story! Be sure to leave a review on how I could improve the story! and don't be afraid to drop some stones if you enjoyed!
The point off is for some of the puntuation errors and grammar stuff. Other than that for me this was a plain old nostalgia trip, Dragon Ball and Dragon Ball Z were my childhood. So it was fun meeting those characters once more in those situations. The ideas of this novel are rather well thought out and the characters are interesting as well. Give it a read if you like DBZ. That's my recommendation
Hands down a very enjoyable read. Besides a few grammatical and spelling errors this book is great. The author does a good job on bringing the characters and story to life. Overall it’s a great read and I’d recommend it to anyone who loves a good fanfic.
Hello! i hope you enjoyed this installment of my first story on Webnovel! Its a FF about The time patrol and the missions they take with a bit of side questing in-between! Dont be afraid to leave your thoughts! I would love to talk to my audience to see what i can improve on! also i love reading chapter comments so leave some of those too! One more thing! if you really enjoyed the story do drop some stones so more people can read this story that you enjoyed as well!
I used to watch it when I was so little that I remember the dragon of the track to be the scariest thing I've could ever across. From a writer's perspective, I must say that the author has so much potential that he can be a successful writer in these genres. Like the scene and the transition, loved it.
Only the updating is what got zero rest every aspect of this fan fic is brilliant hope you can restart this magnificent tale of dragon ball
All in all is a very good storyline however there are multiple mistakes in punctuations etc. the story itself is interesting and the characters are quite unique