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The Young Tianlin, Carrying the Holy Spirit Bead and Suppressing Demon Sword Martial Soul, traversed to the Douluo Continent and Join Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Sect As a Disciple Of Sword Douluo. PS: Don't join the group of Tang San, don't worship the Grandmaster, but don't hostile to Tang San either.....
Original Author: The Beginning of the Fantasy Pig
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This MC is clearly against "spirit hall" which goes against what I'm looking for, I really dislike Tang San and his Master, he destroys the killing capital and spirit hall, which plunges the continent into chaos, also in the manga Tang San is the character I hate the most (those who read it understand, Tang San becomes the most disgusting main character I know). In this fanfic this MC does not seem to think about the future and the good of all people, therefore it does not align with my search for entertainment, I will give 5 stars for taking the time to translate but I will not continue reading
To be honest, most aspects of the novel are done well. The only big issue is the grammer. It constantly changes from he to she, as well as a very weird use of punctuation to the point where it feels like words, or even whole sentences are missing. I can’t really comment much on update stability since the person who put this up isn’t the original author, but i suspect the updates to come in randomly with no real schedule as well. If you can handle the grammer issues and the fact that there won’t be much updates if any then the aren’t any other issues
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that's a dirty move you did it in the last chapter, why you'd have to stop on that point I need the next chapter but, the novel is good if I had an issue it will be all Chinese names on the novel but that isn't the author fault after all the Douluo series is Chinese
I appreciate your work and even though there are some that are not according to my personal wishes, but I will still rate this as good enough. . keep it up author....
En serio muy buen Fanfic, podrias decirme el nombre original ( en chino ) o pasar el link donde lo lees para leer los raws y no quedarme con la duda
Honestly really good story love everything story development-wise also because you didn't just make the mc overpowered from the start they have to work their way to it which is a nice touch. Sadly though I won't be continuing to read the story because of the grammar issue all over the story like constantly interchanging he and her. As well as other small mistakes like that happening often throughout the story in the thirty chapters I have read so far.
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I will give this Fanfic 5 Star.......... I will upload a novel 2 chapters a day next week. For this week I will upload 5 chapters and bonus if have 10 comments or 10 power stone
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