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Rios Gracie is a unique mixed martial artist that only competes in the underground fight. A member of the Gracie family, he risks his life for the sake of getting stronger. At the age of 23, Rios decided to retire from the underground life as he earns enough money for him to spend for a lifetime.
Unfortunately, when a man proposes, God oppose.
On the day he travels back to reunite with his family in Brazil, the plane he was on got hijack. A man with a bomb strap tightly on his body threatens to blow up the whole plane along with passengers. The bomb was a non- defusable one, a sacrifice is needed, or everyone will end up dead with an incomplete corpse. Rios risk his life to save the passengers as he grabs on the suicided man and jumps out through an emergency exit.
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All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc..., are the property of their respective owners, Tang Jia San Shao, Louis Cha(Jin Yong) and Masashi Kishimoto.
I do not own the cover images. If you are the owner and want me to take it down, I am happy to do so.
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when I was reading it I was only interested at first because I just wanted to read a Douluo Dalu 3 fanfic but after some chapters I found I really enjoy it
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#Hidden Gem# For passerby people I reccomend that if you like duoluo Dalu fanfics this wont dissapoint. Based on the original but not following the original protagonist, his own path maybe one day it will intercede with the original protagonist. so far it shows an outline development that overlaps at parts but has his own path of cultivation and goals to achieve. Hoping for alot of things to happen in the story its very exciting. The only downside us right now there hasnt bern an update for a while. I want to know whats next and its making me a bit crazy.
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This story is really enjoyable, especially because of its originality in comparison to most fanfics and inparticular, I really like the bg and character design/plot in this story. Though, I have to ask if this story is dropped, since I believe this story can have incredible development?
Please update more I loke the story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Bro continue the novel don't stop it in the middle of it your writing ability is very good and they are best update the next chapter as soon as possible please now we are getting intrest in your novel please update new chapter i hope you update the next chapter please don't disappoint me thank you
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your idea is extremely good but you need to see your grammar: like your tense, spelling and appropriate word choice, etc You can use "Grammarly" to improve writing quality. Then character development needs to be done.... have him interact with people more and progress the plot...you can write the training part in special occasions like before important fight, progress to next level,gaining something important,etc and you have a bad habit of writing in present tense, please use other tenses also. bye, hope you don't drop this
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sooo who is the love interest? . . . . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]