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Sage is a typical high schooler that you could find anywhere. A smart but mysterious kind. Pressured with an endless amount of debt, Sage finds himself struggling to survive and clear out debts and bills. While providing for his sick mother.
Sage focuses only on work to quickly payout all needed financially.
But all that stops...
As an unforeseen event shakes the world to its core. A phenomenon throws the world into disarray...
Now, Sage finds himself struggling to survive... JUST to live and save his mother...
But then, along the way, he unknowingly discovers the mysteries of the strange phenomenon.
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System/game stories are not my thing but this was pretty good! Sage is a very relatable character that the audience can easily sympathize with. I like how the author describes actions in this story. The part I didn't like was when the author would put text in [* I don't mind sound effects or noises being written like that but sometimes the author would write stuff like [*busy*]. It doesn't make sense to me and there were also a few grammatical issues. However, the rest of the story was pretty good!
Hello, author here! I have shamelessly given myself a five-star review because I promise you readers won't regret it when you read. So please stick around and read the chapters to better understand the story. Don't forget to please leave comments and reviews, to clearly state your opinions thank you in advance. I will try my best to improve and work harder to keep you readers entertained.(⌒▽⌒)☆
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I enjoyed the story so far. The writing style is amazing! It surely is something to look forward to. The plot and visualization of the story is really good. This story has so much potential as long as it is written consistently with a good plot and good character development along the way. Please more chapters, Author!! I want some more !!
The title of the story is itself so intriguing that it makes one to read it. The protagonist Sage is described in an expressive manner and the way world background is created, really fabulous. Talking about the updates which are quite stable. Keep it up author[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Intriguing plot, I like doomsday stories so I gave it a try. This story has much potential and develops well, good job author, good luck and happy writing.
The writing style is very detailed and direct. the plot is intriguing and will have you begging to read more. This is a very unique story so far.
Just read the few first chapters, if you keep the current pace I think you should be fine for the future, I hope u get 1 Mil views or something lol
The story is really good! I love how Sage always looks after his mom and tries to find a way to save her! I hope she will one day wake up and make him happy! And the game theme is the best too! I love it and would recommend it to everyone!
The town is panicking of what is happening as I too! It's really interesting what will Sage does. It's like I'm reading hunters of prey. over all, it's a very good story so keep it up!
Very interesting story, good character development and great story flow. The only thing I can suggest was to keep the consistency of your story. If you can make more character development, try it because your characters in the story is one of the most important part in the plot that you wanted to have... thats all
Interesting novel. I liked it's story development and character design. Hope for something more interesting. Please keep updating new chapters 😁😁
Everything is just so nice about this novel. It has a nice ML Sage, and I like his attitude. I loved reading it and I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters
great character development characters feel alive descriptions are great writing quality is beyond good updates regular keeps you on the edge love it keep it up
The story is amazing! The author presented the characters and world background very well. It has some great plot twist! Really like it. Good job author!
Sage, what a catchy name for a protagonist. Anyway, what a glorious origin. Tragedy strikes, and now the protagonist must struggle to survive. What a great concept. This is an amazing novel. I recommend it.
There were minor punctuation and spelling errors here and there. Plotwise, the story is intriguing and fascinating. I love how you portrayed the MC as a character who prioritises his family's safety above himself. I hope he manages to survive and somehow protect those he holds dear in those trying time. *For punctuations, if you have already used "...?!" then there isn't much need to put a comma behind the sentence unless its a phrase or dialog. There were some errors as well where you used "your" instead of "you're". You're basically means you are... or something while your is used to symbolise something belongs to you. Same goes with the word "his" and "he's" that you wanted to use. This are just pointers for you, because I really enjoyed the story.
I love doomsday novels because they attack your sense of safety at a fast pace. It's easy to get hooked and need to know what happens in the next chapter and that's the case with this novel. Good job author!
I have to say, I like the writing style and the story development and character building, is isn't too slow or too fast it moves with the perfect pace and keeps us wondering what will happen next!! Keep it up author! Looking forward to much more updates!
It have an interesting start, really made me intrigued. I love the sound effects, like I can imagine the sounds in my mind. The chapters are decent long, will not make you bored. Keep up the good work author !👍👍