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D.E.A.D. (Domain Expansion: Adventure in DC)
Before you read anything:
#1. This story gives a strong impression that it is a simulation, right from the start. Don't read if you're not a patient person.
#2. Story is strongly plot-oriented and includes a lot of deep narrations. Again, don't read if you're looking for something simple.
#3. Read if you're looking for something exciting, a lot of action and chaos, and, if you're patient enough to watch the story unfold (unlike The Cursed World).
#4. Author may not give a F*
(Synopsis)
My name is Wan Juan. I was just a normal guy striving to climb the ladder of life when I walked into him. Little did I know of his nature: A Cursed Celestial.
In his D.E.A.D world, my story began in the lovely island of Themyscira that instantly transformed into a battle ground.
Slowly, I grasped my nature of being capable to use Cursed Energy and Cursed Techniques as I navigated the treacherous circumstance I had found myself in.
Fate bind my story as a prophecy unfolded. Pacts were forged as the situation escalated, and I chose to exorcise the Amazons.
But it was only until I met the Justice League that I grasped my true nature and the weight on my shoulders, as, The Cursed Millennial.
The salvation and fate of all existence rested on my ability to hone my jujutsu and face threats beyond mortal understanding.
C/N:
The first chapter involves a rapid shit in POV like in the synopsis above. From I to He. Nothing wrong with it. Get used to it.
Disclaimer:
I own nothing in the realm of DC or JJK. Just my ideas.
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Y'all, idk what the other dude talking about this is easy to understand if you just pay attention lol
Okay, I read the first chapter and I already saw the problem, organization, the author, he just changes the perspective out of nowhere without warning, I don't know who the protagonist is, whether it's the worker or the guy who looks like Mahito, problem and contest and organization
continue this ppppppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss im bored and this cured it for about thirty minutes
really good, the start is a little confusing but when you get through the first few chapters it starts to shine👍👍👍👍👍👍
The story isn't bad, but your description of events are lacking overall and coupled with the constant change in characters perspectives result in a pretty confusing narrative, to make it even worse you hate following a linear timeline and sometimes use it unnacessarily just because you clearly like doing so. Overall those are comum "mistakes" among new writers and you'll iron then out with experience, just be mindfull of it when writing AND reading so you can improve your craft by observing and comparing where your story fails and where someone else's story work as intended. Anyway, hope to see more works from you in the future ✌✌