/ Fantasy / Devil Slave (Satan system)
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{Warning: Mature content}
The World called me an abomination, a freak of nature, a stain from my mother's legs.
Even after righting their wrongs with my blade, it was still the same.
However, in the midst of my despair, one person reached out his warm hand for me.
Lucifer Morningstar. Even though he is the Devil spoken of in Legends, I shall take the leap of faith and do his bidding.
To take breath in reincarnation in another world and Slaughter my foes: Demons, Angels, Devils, gods, and everything I consider EVIL in my PATH
Don't get me wrong, my blade is a respecter of neither man nor beast.
All that stand in my way shall FALL to the recreation of a world in the image I see fit.
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If you want to know how sick this book is, read the first chapter.
I still don't know how the idea for this book came out of my head.
(Heaven! please forgive me)
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Demons, Devils, Fallen Angels, Angels, Soul Eaters, Cursers, Witches, Dark elves, Hell beasts, Heaven Beasts, Death Beasts...
Practically, Every sick, both rosy and terrible thing of the underworld will be found in this book.
My research is deep.
(Note: Sick Shit happens here. If you don't have stomach for it, please run. You still have time.)
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this is one of the best novel it has amazing plot and has such a vast power system mc is villain with some wierd code of conducts it's awesome everything is exciting idk why this thing isn't on trending also why just 1M it deserves far more than that
It’s definitely a good novel I love the way it starts off, it reminds me of your other book in my bloody hit novel all in all great book love the mc and I have nothing but gratitude for you writing this.
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I have read up to chapter 560 and I can say the following:1) Don't start if you don't like blood and gore.2) The author works really hard to write the book, have you ever seen a writer studying biology for scenes of blood and gore?3) The character is intelligent and capable, just a bit stupid in discovering the system's capabilities.4) The only thing missing is little or no side character descriptions.Note: Sometimes we forget what the characters look like, so sometimes they could be reminded in the form of little reminders or a special section explaining character appearances could be published.5) In short, it is a book that has been given a good effort, you will not regret reading it.
its start with a good story good hero good Developing till ch 210 when he let athena slaps him and he do nothing and then he let her to live . and then she betrayed him 2 the developing after he destroyed the city its not that much i am in ch 306 and I'll leave this novel caus I'm Disappointed
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I started reading this work as a breath of fresh air. Tired of stupid MCs and the power of friendship. And at first the story was really interesting, but then it went down the drain. MC went from the slogan: “If you are not useful, then you are dead” to “If you are not useful, then I will die protecting you...”. I'm currently at chapter 678 and can't read any further. Since the introduction of AI, there has been more water than my neighbors when I flooded them. And why is MC surrounded by idiots? Even the zombie managed to outsmart them? Would it make Lenny look like a genius compared to them? Cheap... A separate topic about battles. Their system is the same: first the MC is beaten for 3-5 chapters and then he admits that he was initially stronger and was just playing around and ends the fight. Of course, in this case, enemies do not die, no, only friends die, otherwise the atmosphere is not right. Starting from 666, he cannot kill anyone, since all enemies either escape or are resurrected. The feeling that he will be humiliated by everyone until the last chapter and will all die together? I was especially upset by the patterned growth of the world along with MS. It all started with the phrases: “Even the gods would envy his rapid growth,” and then enemies and friends began to re-align two large worlds at a time (from Lesser Demon to Greater Demon) in order to correspond... It’s a shame that such an interesting idea and promising beginning slipped into an ordinary watery, formulaic and uninteresting work...
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*Story Potential 7.8/10 *Power system potential 8.1/10 *Potential mc 7/10 *Mc Madness 6.7/10 =Personal preference= *(I have read up to chapter 42 and the mc seems to want to help humanity in a twisted way but it is still helping, "potential for possible poison evil antihero savior of humanity indirectly") *Currently he is like a worshiper of Lucifer, he idolizes him and wants to fulfill his mandate, I don't like that but it's passable, what I absolutely dislike is the ideology of the mc, and wanting to save humanity, the author really likes the theme of the demonic and madness but indifference and transcendence are also attractive traits for the mc, I recommend reading "The Path of Omniscience"
Honest review here, this novel is on the unique side with it's awesome story and world build. Update stability is nice. MC Is no simp💯 However, it declined after the first 300 chapters. Author uses mostly AI and a lot of description and hardly no talk and progress. Overall, 3.8.
I'm far too lazy to write a remotely good review at all so I'm just giving 5 stars to show the author that I love the book, I also, love watching Lenny get through insane predicaments I love the macabre acts and scenes within the book, I love how you(the author) progressed in writing skills, you went from a decent, novice writer to being able to pull me into your book like it was real stuff, a word of advice tho, please please lower the amount of words used to describe things in the current chapters, no offense as of rn most of the chapters words are descriptions for 1-2 attacks, I would keep rambling but I don't wanna seem like a jerk, but peace author, love the book yo
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I love the book. Not just some run of the mill novel that has like 10 versions ghat are totally the same, no this is creative and very good to read. my only critic is that the author makes a flipping Cliffhanger every chapter... i mean just...
Writing quality is nice 4/5. Stability of updates is cool 4/5. Story development... from his first fight to the point he could relax the check his status page you need to read 20 chapters of info dump and pointless interactions in order to make the info dump needed. I would have called this a slow burn but its not even that. its not burning at all so 1/5.. To call it dark is wrong. It's sick. SAW level sick. clear and detailed explanations of butchering character's somehow reads like high school biology. Again it's not dark it's sick. MC is an idiot. somehow sounds like autistic or some other brain-damaged childish murderer. while still around 30+ years old he is describing murder and blood childishly. World background is way tooooooo much detailed way too much. so even after 30 chapters all you'll understand is it's a post-apocalyptic world where demons are ruling and humans became livestock. So overall i do not recommend to sane ppl who likes to read some nave villainous and/or dark fantasy. But if you are into gore and butchering go for it. Defiantly not my cup of tea. best of luck to author.
Reading this story, it's obvious that the only thing the author had in mind when writing it was gore. No substance, only violence. Lacks any real creative writing, and the target audience for this would be edgy 13 year olds. The story is boring and messy, and the grammar is decent. Background had potential but screwed up by funky writing. Characters all suck, and MC is basically a serial killers wet dream and has no real value/ characterization besides being an edgy person who likes to do messed up stuff. The writing of morals in general in this story is so incredibly inconsistent and overall this just sucks. If you want a story with substance, dont bother with this.
The story is good, but I feel like the MC is a little wishy washy when it comes to his humanity. He is written as a psychopath and this brilliant assassin, but at times he is illogically stupid. There's also the bit about him finding humanity, losing it, and finding it again at what I thought were unnecessary times. Personally, it just kind of made the MC feel artificial, not totally bad but not great either. I liked how the world building played out. I thought that it was well done with different factions and incorporating multiple facets from an apocalyptic world. I really only have two major critiques. Firstly, there are large parts where I feel there is a step forward in plot, five steps back with long info dumps or a random background story, and then a mad rush of 10 steps forward with plot. I'm sure there's a grand design, but there were whole chapters at times that I just skipped. There were definitely some plot twists that I never saw coming though coupled with some pretty entertaining dialogues as well. My second critique is mostly grammar. By no means is it bad, but there are times when the completely wrong word is used or an occasional character name switch. Again, not the worst, it would just sometimes break my flow. The story as a whole is enjoyable. Thank you for your hard work. I was honestly surprised on how fast you could push out content.
The premise is good and it does aren’t bay the author hasa good plan on how the story should go. But the writing style is so frustrating with so many errors that it is hard to keep reading
I had always wondered what it would be like if a murderer or a bad guy was reincarnated and not a shut in otaku. After all, they are both good and bad Gods or in this case, Devil...😈