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Destiny’s Game

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作者: RyuN

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Jiu Li is in for a wild ride as he suddenly finds himself as the villain in a novel after overworking himself in his past life. But just as he has the chance to change his fate, he is faced with a new obstacle: the novel's protagonist, Zheng Hu, who is aware of Jiu Li's presence. How will Jiu Li navigate this tricky situation and avoid getting tangled in Zhang Hu's story?

[Author’s note: This is something I wrote years ago, please dont link me together with my writing of the past (the majority of the chapters), i swear the future chapters won’t be like this TT]

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Please take note that this is my first time composing a novel! It’s suggestable that there will be errors during some of the contents . I apologize if the novel is not to your liking or standards! >~<

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This story presents an intriguing and unique concept, with the transmigration theme adding a captivating twist to the narrative. The characters, especially Jiu Li and Wei Feng, are well-developed and relatable, making it easy for readers to invest in their journeys. The pacing keeps the story engaging, with a good balance of action and introspection. The attention to detail, particularly in world-building and symbolism, enriches the story's depth. It's evident that the author has put thought into crafting a complex and immersive world. However, to further enhance the story, consider delving deeper into the emotional experiences of the characters. Providing more vivid descriptions of settings and environments could also elevate the reader's connection to the narrative. Overall, this story holds great promise and has the potential to captivate a wider audience with a little more attention to emotional depth and descriptive language. I look forward to seeing how the narrative unfolds in future chapters.

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