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Desire of Immortality (Harry Potter AU)

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4.12 (12 レビュー結果)

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When a ruthless CEO gets run over by truck kun, he wakes up as a new person. He was now Tiberius Black, the son of Sirius Black and Amelia Bones. He was neglected by both his parents, but he didn't care as he saw no use for them. This is the story of a man's greed for power and Eternal Life.

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Giga_Weeb

It goes for a good AU setting, but then immediately falls apart with plot holes (if his parents dont like arcturus why leave him with him etc.). Could've been good but the author cannot go a full half chapter without randomly dropping a line that shatters the HP worldbuilding and rules. like magic abilities that dont use magic, wands having infinite magic, 2 stones, insane permanent power ups that canonically AU or not should've needed a massive dark ritual from 'putting magic through your arm.'

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Sagvey_Ay

do you feel the darkness too, child ??:)!! no, I am the darkness[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

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Spectre_1919

It has got a good plot but the way it is written makes it feel rushed and it doesn’t go into very many details.

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Guri_01_09

Hey Author :: Its been a while . How about U Write a New one In Marvel verse ??

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Deimesu

I'm going to be honest. I can't stand the "villain" mc that doesn't have a reason to be one. But I don't wanna ruin the rating.

1yr
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ken_uchiha

ok I like the AU but to much forced plot

1yr
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Rysian
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Fast but good ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Skull_of_Life

The score is surprisingly low, there are 2 factors I value the most here. Evil MC and plot without unnecessary details, in fact, those who have already read several Harry Potter fanfictions will see the same thing in others and it is unpleasant, so I like the way the author acted here, there is a point without water and this is enough.

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IntheDarkness

Gerçekten çok iyiydi. Kısa sürede okudum. Gerçekten sürükelyic bir olay örgüsüydü. İlk başta onunda diğer salak, kendi kendine boş yere kötü adam diyen ana karakter olacağını sanmıştım ama gerçek bir kötü adamdı. Yazarı çok tebrik ediyorum. Emeklerine sağlık. 🙏🙏

1yr
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Well... thanks for the chapter, but, author name is? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Vaneford

Good enough for me[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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