Demonic Raven in the Magus World

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RavenMaster

You can think of it as a story similar to Age of Adepts, the Wizarding World, or the infamous Warlock of the Magus World. The main protagonist falls into this world of magic. Armed with nothing but a biochip, he shall overcomes all odds and become a magus for the sake of completing his dreams of strength, immortality and wealth. The protagonist will be slightly evil and pragmatic. Still, he will have values and will not kill innocents for pleasure. Please give me your power stones :)

LV 4

LittleVamp

Good Story... Essence of a Magus Life.... Rational MC.... Bloodline Magus.... Physique cultivation..... Reason and Logic Prevalence.... Hope it continues to update. Thanks for Author's Efforts. 😁

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Michael_Huntsalot

Please think of logistics of rebuilding a town in a month there is no need to make it that unbelievable. If it took a half a year then it may not sound too insane. Over all not bad, but slow down and think of how to flesh out setting and characters in the story.

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Eggcellent

Good Story I like the fact that it is set in settings similar to World of Magi yet it is original. The MC has a nice semi-crazy personality that I like. He is a grinder Will he go down the path of a bloodline path acolyte as well as that of a knight or focus on just one?

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Master_Of_gu

You've seen your work and you have enough skills to write interesting things, but a simple tip, don't limit your imagination to morals and principles. Make her evil, on the natural instinct of humans, good luck 4 stars to motivate you, if the character is evil I will change my rating to 5 stars good luck

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Proreader09

Even though i wont say its perfect , its nice quality and author infused his own ideas . very similar to age of adepts , wizard world and warlock of magus world. But from different percpective.

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Dante00

Actualiza y da un aviso de cuando actualiza aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasasassassasasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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leoreview1

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kinshi

So far I like the whole storyline. The fact that the main character is a body refinement magus it s interesting. Hope you will surprise me

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Dante00

Espero que una ves al día actualices , no te demores mucho gracias aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Dante00

Bien hecho espero más aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaqqqqqaaaaaaaaweyyehryeuebrheie

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Wanderingimmortal

well this review is totally not worth it but still im hoping dear author will make an update again for the chapters before i make a more detailed conclusion about the story

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SIN3

This novel is addictive. I can't stop asking for more from her ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................