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Demon King System

Fantasy 11 章 33.9K ビュー
作者: Dark_demise

4.9 (12 レビュー結果)

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Ruby, a scruff, prone to bad luck and low maintenance man is known to bring misfortune wherever he goes. In addition to his misery, Ruby has a shabby appearance which left him a laughing stock among people.

Being a magnet to chaos, he snagged the attention of a powerful entity by his strange existence. Subsequently, he awakened the ability of 'reading memories' in exchange for the gradual loss of his individuality.

Will he neglect all the hatred and continue to help others? Or will he end up being a heinous monster who will eradicate everyone standing in his way?

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KaGen
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Awesome. I gave five stars in each category. Beginning with wiki pages like; magic types, stat details, etc. This is an awesome idea to facilitate the readers' efforts and to attract more readers in this way. And yes, mia friend; murdering is immoral, eating animals is normal :D

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alucardtfs

good story so far will follow it for now I suppose have a great day.....................................................................................

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Dark_demise

I am the author of this novel, it is my first work. I will try my hardest to make this as good as I can, and not leave any plot holes, I want this to be realistic in a way the everything follows all the fundamental laws of physics so readers can predict strengths and weaknesses without any plot armour

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BrewingFantasies

So great and so good. As far as I've read the book holds potential and with just a few brushes of editing can pull out it's wonders. The narration is readable and the cliche trope is played pretty well, with the blend of fantasy and other elements it's definitely a good light headed read to pick~

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Levi_owo

Loved the story. Everything happening in the mc's life was explained beautifully. I just loved listing to mc's thoughts all the time lol but overall this story has a lot of potential and it is going in the right direction.

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Misaki_Midsaka

Amazing! Keep it up, author! Liked it so far and waiting to see how the story goes on. Overall the setting and plot were both engaging. Best of luck!

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Erfan_Sh

From the style to its structure, this novel is superb. It has the grammatical format that is just my spot of tea! The storyline flows from one chapter to another to create a holistic and cohesive plot that almost drives itself.

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Ferjenni

The characters and world background is depicted very well. The descriptions are on point. This one is for those who like dark novels. Thanks for sharing your story, author-nim.

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Duraika
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Interesting story so far, Ruby background was quite intriguing. The story build-up is going nicely I like where this is going and I would like to see future chapters and I can see this story has the potential to rise up and became quite popular, keep up the good work.

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SelfProclaimedNerd

Long paragraphs bore me, I recommend keeping the sentences into 2 or 3 otherwise it will be too taxing to read. With that said, keep up the good work and continue writing!

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Harshman_singh

The story is really great! I would like to recommend this book to everyone. Read this book and enjoy your time! Keep up the great work, author.

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LordofKaizen

A wonderful book with lots of promise. The book has an amazing storyline and an interesting concept. The writer is blessed with a skill in writing that I am sure will make this book a hit in now time. Stop wasting your time in the review section and read Now!Now!Now!

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