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Sword Sovereign Jin
the strongest sword user on the countless realms
He was one of the 4 rulers of the grandmist along with his 3 brothers
Sadly the countless realms started to go war with the Realm Devourer
In a crucial battle Jin used his Forbidden Attack successfully killing the Devourer while also destroying His Body killing him
that is what he knew until he saw the light
and heard the voices of his new family
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Yes Yes Yes, fucking well, don't throw it, very few fanficts on doulou Dalu good and even more finished, and if you can, make him the Emperor/Holy spirit, then we will be against it(just he is 20 rank in 7 years, in 14 (when Rong Rong in Shrek goes) he must be at least 60, and necessarily a prescribed romantic line, she deserved a good fate, and not death as in the Canon(about the emerald Swan (I forgot the name)
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Very good, more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more, Make him a monster of improvement, and when Rong Rong goes to Shrek, he will follow her as a guard(at least the king of Spirits, with the fighting strength of the Emperor and above), make straight the strongest MC of the strongest, we do not mind, only for
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Everything is fine, more often only two chapters, and one more thing, increase the description of the shock of gg's talent, because if grandma snake saw his talent, she would faint, because for her, even Oscar was monstrously talented, and about the king of the spirit of level 60, with 5 black rings in 15 years, I'm generally silent
Shameless author here, First allow me to rate my work 5 stars, 2nd THANK YOU for everyone who reads my story, hope you enjoy reading it English is not my main language, I hope you go easy on my work I'll update Chapters as soon as I finished writing them Once again thank you for reading my fic
I really like your fan fiction but I feel like the MC is a little too powerful. I mean like a Soul king already while the others are Grand masters. But it quite unique to see it happen.
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Daré puntuación máxima porque me gustó esta lectura, tendrá sus fallos, y algunos puntos que definitivamente no coincido con el autor(Bing Bing👎/ Renxue👍) pero todo puede pasar, así que continua.
The story is not bad. the idea about the abilities and ocs are good. However, the author missed a lot or added information that's inaccurate or isn't supposed to be there yet. Like mental power, at that time mental power isn't actually quantifiable yet; or spirit aging or tang san's and gang's spirit rank. I can actually understand rong rong's rank may be the effect of mc's influence to her but the others... Anyway, if you don't mind those details and just want to read for past time. It's not a bad book to read.
Character is from a cultivation world, but even so he doesn't use any cultivation techniques... Even worse, 10k years for first spirit ring, it's basically just badly written...
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this is fantastic don't stop keep going and try to make renxue and bibi dong into good side and make that bustard spirit Hall level 99 elder an evil God that way its will be much appreciated
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Hey.. Where did you get that cover from??? What's novel character is from??? What's his name??? BTW, good story, my friend.. I'll add it to my library, consider me one of your loyal readers for now...
it's very good I hope you update more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For those who start reading this fanfic, I'll start by letting you know that the author doesn't have enough knowledge about the work of Douluo Dalu, he probably only saw the manga and not the novel, because it has several errors only in the first 4 chapters. Starting with: 1-He was born in the Ning Rongrong clan as her brother but his name is Xiao jin. But this is less 2-In his awakening of spirits he did not even awaken at least one spirit from his parents, which is something that does not change in Douluo Dalu because of the genetic, like Tang San, and even Hao Yuhao has a mutation in his father's spirit , Tang Wulin also has a mutation in his father's spirit. 3- BIGGEST MISTAKE EVER, for the first ring he had a 10,000 year old WTF ... that is Douluo Dalu 1 at that time it is impossible to have for the first ring a spiritual ring that is more than 1,000 years, and that is using some special technique, because even though the animal is dead it still struggles in its ring form. even in the posteriores Doulous they only got 10,000 rings in ranks 40 to 50, the only one to have 1,000,000 and 100,000 rings in ranks 10 to 20 was Yuhao but that was only because the animals wanted to turn Yuhao into one God,and for that they transformed into spiritual rings with intelligence the first of its kind, and yet they had to put a seal on their powers ,otherwise he would explode
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