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DAWNLESS: WHY GO INTO WAR WITH A BROTHER.

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作者: Terney

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Two Brothers;not really brothers move on after college to the military. Both swore never to betray each other. But the world changes and makes them to get separated. Watch out for them

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Larry_An

This is very very good good good good good good good good good good good man pls give us more of such good good good good good good good good good gooooooooooooooooooooooooodies

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Terney

Well I don't really have much to say since this is a new book and also its a war and military fiction, so keep it up Guy i love the story line.

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Terney

Great but you need 2 improve Mr aurther as in the 2 brothers scene should be note clear to readers and understanding the characters should be clear to everyone your ever terney.its gr8 we bear the same name....

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Odlord

I really think guys this author has something up his sleeves.i have read all his chapters and his tryin since his just starting .so I think he should be given a chance, for we never knew how release that witch started or how library of heavens path started

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Larry_An

The storyline is too Short and you need to be consistent in your stability of updates .You should also develop your character design I don't quite understand your world background

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